1、2009高考英语书面表达冲刺复习,平时要求：,1. 格式 2. 人称 3. 要点 4. 时态 5. 字数 6. 语法 7. 书写,词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,1.覆盖了所有的要点2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑4. 语言得体,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,语言地道，规范,一 改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。,The boy is very hungry and he hurried home.,Hungry, the boy hurri
2、ed home.,The boy, hungry, hurried home.,二. Transformation of sentences in writing (写作中的句型转换),把其中一句改为分词短语 He had finished supper. He went out to have a walk then.,Having finished supper, he went out to have a walk.,A. 合并为简单句,二. Transformation of sentences in writing (写作中的句型转换),2. 把其中一句改为介词短语 He was b
3、rought in. His hands were tied behind his back.,He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back.,B. 合并为复合句The Chinese artists were to perform here that night. The news cheered everyone of us.,The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone of us.,2 In recent
4、years, Beijing has been advancing very fast. All these make peoples lives convenient, pleasant and colorful.which,In recent years, Beijing has been advancing very fast, makes peoples lives convenient, pleasant,With the development ofso that,Beijing, peoples lives are becoming more and more convenien
5、t, pleasant and colorful.,Nowadays, Beijing is developing fast peoples lives are getting more convenient, pleasant and colorful.,C. 把复合句改为简单句,She was anxious to find a job after shefinished her studies.,Having finished her studies, she was anxious to find a job.,1. 把从句改为分词短语,C. 把复合句改为简单句,2. 把从句改为介词短
6、语,I insisted that he should go.,I insisted on him going.,三. 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.,Though he is wealthy, he works hard.,Wealthy as he is, he works hard.,In spite of /Despite his wealth, he works hard.,三. 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.,He didnt get up until 7 ocl
7、ock.,It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.,Not until 7 oclock did he get up.,As soon as we arrived at the village, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers.,On arriving at the village，we were warmly.,The moment we arrived at the village, we were,We were warmly welcomed by the villagers immediate
8、ly we arrivedat the village.,No sooner had we arrived at the village than we ,Hardly had we arrived at the village when we.,四.using “ complicated / advanced words” ,注意使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。,Dont worry about your expenses for university education, and we will try to help you., and we will make
9、 the greatest effort /do our best / try every means to help you.,At that time the taxi driver had to ask the tourist for help.,At that time the taxi driver had no choice but to turn to the tourist.,I came up with a good idea.,I had a good idea.,A good idea occurred to / struck / came to me.,合并为简单句,把
10、其中一句改为分词短语,把其中一句改为介词短语,合并为复合句,把复合句改为简单句,把从句改为分词短语,把从句改为介词短语,三，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、 强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.,四，注意使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。,五.有效使用连接词，过渡自然，连贯通顺，使文章结 构紧凑。,一，改变句子的开头方式,二，句型转换,1 汉式英语2 句式单一 平铺直叙3 基础词汇掌握不牢4 书写不规范,Common mistakes,Someone could hardly receive the result. So they lose their heart. We shou
11、ld find out our poor points in our studies and throw them away. I think we should think more good thinks. dare not raise their heads before the other students. keep a normal heart(口)keep a normal state of mind keep an easy mindtake it easy,1 汉式英语,When we fail, we are very sad. We are in low spirits. We dont believe ourselves and we wont work hard at our lessons.Faced with failure, some of them feel depressed all the time. Whats worse, they throw doubt upon their own ability and no longer work hard at their studies.,2. 句式单一 平铺直叙,4 书写不规范,9分,6分,24分,二卷少失分, 一卷争满分， 得阅读者得天下!,得分意识:,
