1、,学英语,中,顺昌县课题启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究 公开课,应用文写作指导,By Li Yuzhen May 12, 2016,Writing a letter,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,The dialogues between students,B: No, I stayed at home, because everywhere mountain people mountain sea.,A: Did you go traveling during the Spring Festival?,B: Certainly.They heart flower
2、angry open.,A: You made much progress in the mid-term exam.Your parents must be very happy.,Chingish,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,假如你叫李华，你的美国网友Mike通过e-mail告诉你他学汉语方面的困难：口语不好，听力差，写作能力最差,因此想放弃。请你回一封e-mail，给他提出一些建议，鼓励他继续学习。你的建议：1. 口语：尽可能练习，每天背常用语。 2.听力：多听磁带、新闻和歌曲能提高听力水平。 3.写作：多阅读并做笔记，每天练习写，比如写日记等对写作技能有帮助。
3、此外，要对自己有信心。 要求：100词左右，不要逐字译,可增加细节使行文流畅。,审题,1.Type(体裁)：2. Person(主体人称)：3.Tense（主体时态）：,A letter,You,The present tense,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,1.口语：尽可能练习，每天背常用语。 2.听力：多听磁带、新闻和歌曲能提高听力水平。 3.写作：多阅读并做笔记，每天练习写，比如写日记等对写作技能有帮助。此外，要对自己有信心。,Main points,Brainstorm:,words phrases expressions,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中
4、的应用研究公开课,大家用用不同词汇和句型,1. 对.有益,be good for,do good to,be useful to,be helpful to,benefit,be of benefit to,be beneficial to,2. 尽我所能帮助你,try/do my best to help you,do what/all I can to help you,do as much as I can to help you,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,1. 我认为你每天应该记一些常用语。(learn.by heart),I think you,must
5、learn some everyday Chinese by heart,.,My advice is that you,should learn some everyday Chinese by heart,.,I think it necessary for you,to learn some everyday Chinese by heart,.,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,2. 你要尽可能多听磁带来提高听力。（不定式作状语）,In order to improve your listening skills,you had better listen to t
6、apes as often as possible.,You should listen to tapes as often as possible,so that you can improve your listening skills.,.,（目的状语从句）,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,3. 每天写日记将提高你的写作能力。,Keeping diaries every day,will improve your writing skills.,（动名词作主语）,Keep diaries every day,which will improve your writi
7、ng skills.,You will improve your writing skills by,keeping diaries every day.,keeping diaries every day,It is,will improve your writing skills.,that,(强调句),顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,4. 只要你有决心，你就能学好汉语。,Be determined,，and you can learn Chinese well.,（并列句）,You can learn Chinese well with,determination.
8、,Only if you are determined,can you learn Chinese well.,学英语,中,正确使用连接词和过渡词,表递进 whats more, in addition to, besides,表转折 but, however, on the contrary,表因果 because, as, thanks to, as a result,表让步 though, although, even if,表总结 in short, in conclusion,表条件 if, unless, as long as,表列举 for example, such as,表先
9、后 first, then, in the end,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,1. In order to improve your speaking, you should keep practicing every day. _ you also need to learn some everyday Chinese by heart. 2.Writing something in Chinese every day, _ keeping diaries and taking notes, will greatly
10、 improve your writing skills. 3. Listen to Chinese songs_ you can improve your listening skills.,Besides,such as,in order that,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,4. I devoted myself to learning Chinese. _, I made much progress. 5. _you met some difficulty, you should not give up. 6. _ , as long as you keep
11、practising, you will improve your Chinese in time.,As a result,Though,In conclusion,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,Never say die.,永不言败,Where there is a will, there is a way.,有志者，事竟成。,Practice makes perfect.,熟能生巧,God helps those who help themselves.,天助自助者,Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.,心之所愿，无
12、所不成。,Proverbs,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,How to add a proverb properly？,1.You should spend more time practising writing.,As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” You should spend more time practising writing.,No matter what happens,dont give up. As the saying goes, “God helps those who help the
13、mselves.”,2. No matter what happens, dont give up.,How nice to hear from you!,Dear Mike,How to organize the letter,Heading:Why you write the letter,In your letter you talked about difficulties with your Chinese learning and expected my advice.,1. 口语：尽可能练习，每天坚持背常用语。,You should practice speaking Chine
14、se as often as possible ,2.听力：多听磁带、新闻和歌曲能提高听力。,It is necessary to listen to tapes and news every day.,3.写作：多阅读并做笔记，每天练习写，比如写日记等对写作有帮助。,Doing reading as much as you can and taking notes are useful.,First,which is beneficial to speaking skills,In order to improve listening skills,Besides,As for writin
15、g,such as,and learn some everyday Chinese by heart.,You can also listen to Chinese songs.,Writing something in Chinese every day, keeping diaries, will greatly improve your writing skills .,I hope you are confident with yourself. Only if you are determined can you learn Chinese well.,Best wishes.,Yo
16、urs, Li Hua,Ending: Propose hope,As the saying goes,“Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.”,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,Sample,Dear Mike,How nice to hear from you!In your letter you talked about difficulties with your Chinese learning and expected my advice.,First , you should practice speaking
17、Chinese as often as possible, and learn some everyday Chinese by heart, which is beneficial to speaking skills .,Then, in order to improve listening skills, it is necessary to listen to tapes and news every day. Besides,you can also listen to Chinese songs .,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,As for writing
18、, doing reading as much as you can and taking notes are helpful. Whats more, writing something in Chinese every day, such as keeping diaries, will greatly improve your writing skills .,I hope you are confident. As the saying goes, “Nothing is impossible for a willing heart.” Only if you are determin
19、ed can you learn Chinese well.,Best wishes.,Yours, Li hua,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,Let me try.,Last month, your good friend, Lin Tao hurt his leg in an accident. After being in hospital for several weeks, he fell behind (落后)in lessons. Besides, he had to tolerate(忍受) the pain in the leg because he
20、 hasnt fully recovered, so he lost heart and decided to drop out of school. You should write a letter to him.Please write a letter to him.,要点：,1.鼓励他克服困难不放弃2.建议他在学习上向老师和同学求助3.你将尽力帮助他学习功课,要求：100个词，可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,Dear Lin Tao,Body:,Ending: I hope you will recover soon and dev
21、ote yourself to study. With determination, you can catch up with your classmates before long.,Heading: Im sorry to hear that you hurt your leg in an accident last month, and for some reasons you decided to drop out of school.,Yours Sincerely,Best wishes.,1.鼓励他克服困难不放弃2.建议他在学习上向老师和同学求助3.你将用课余时间帮助他学习功课
22、,Hn,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,Dear Lin Tao,No matter what happens, dont give up. God helps those who help themselves.Believe yourself, which will help you overcome all the difficulty.A s for your lessons, dont worry about it. You can turn to your teachers and classmates for help. Besides, I will do
23、 what I can to help you with your lessons in my spare time.,Im sorry to hear that you hurt your leg in an accident last month, and for some reasons you decided to drop out of school.,Yours Sincerely,Best wishes.,I hope you will recover soon and devote yourself to study. With determination, you can c
24、atch up with your classmates before long.,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,Summary: how to write a letter,Tense: The present tense,person: You,Main points:,1. different words , phrases and sentences,3. proverbs,Structure: （heading, body and ending）,2. conjunctions,Improve your handwriting.,by a student of Hengshui Middle School,顺昌县课题 启动效应在高中英语写作中的应用研究公开课,Homework1. Finish the letter after class.,Thanks for listening,
