1、英语书面表达之漫画写作,2010年江苏高考作文新增图画型作文，这种题型更能考查学生的分析问题的能力，因此深受命题者的青睐。考生应注意认真审题，一旦审题有所偏颇，不容易得到高分。此类作文首先要描述图画，然后介绍图画背后所反映的问题，最后联系实际发表自己的观点。,漫画作文（议论类） 攻略：读图，解意，谋篇,1. 读图 1）. 漫画的题目 眼睛 2）. 漫画的画面 细节 3）. 漫画的文字 观点 4）. 漫画的夸张 寓意,2. 解意 1）. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 ）. 联系生活，明晰主旨 注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)，切记要认真阅读！,3. 谋篇（3 parts:） 1) des
2、cribe the picture 2) interpret its meaning 3) give your opinions about the phenomenon,Some usefull sentence structures: Part 1 Describe the picture The picture is talking about/shows The picture shows a common phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon. In the picture, there are/is
3、(are) doing The picture above is about Lets look at the picture above/first.,Part 2 Interpret the picture It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere. The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of The picture indicate that we Nowadays, it is a common phenom
4、enon that This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among,Part 3 Give your opinions I think/believe that As far as Im concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view, should It is better/advisable to I consider it necessary,PartC Polish up your article! 1.
5、 To use linking words if necessary 表示平行、对等或选择关系and, as well as, together with, not onlybut also. 表示转折关系but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while 表示对比关系on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand. 表示因果关系so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to. 表
6、示时间顺序关系first, second,then, next, finally, for one thing .for another, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系besides, whats more, in addition, worse still, above all 表示解释、说明关系such as, for example, for instance, in other words, and so on 表示结论in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion,2. To
7、use complicated structures if possible,Part D 注意 1. 保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确 体裁：议论文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第三人称 . 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误 1)误解图意 大忌！ 2)企图幽默 可笑！ 3)不明寓意 白写！ 4)中心不明 混乱！ . 控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆） . 结尾要精辟！,Conclusion: 一篇好的英语漫画作文: 仔细审题, 准确立义, 规范行文, 整洁书写,注意：1 ）仔细品味图中文字的幽默、无奈，要适当发挥想象，不要做简单描述。2 ）词数150 左右。,To most of the parents ,
8、 it is no easy job to keep their children away from the personal computer. Nearly all parents are thinking of the most effective ways to make the Internet safer for their children . Their solutions are as follows . Some of them think advanced hardware can be equipped into computers for network secur
9、ity while some parents prefer security software available on the InternetIf these dont work , they will cover the screen with underwear to protect their children from harmful information.,Nowadays it is well known that teenager network security has become so serious that the whole society focuses on
10、 it . In my opinion ，much attention should be paid to this issue . As parents , they are supposed to communicate with their children to help them make good use of the Internet with their study.,Additionally, it is our governments responsibilities to take actions to create a greener Internet environm
11、ent. As for ourselves , we should build up strong self-awareness . It is important for us to concentrate on the useful information rather than computer games and so on .,If only I could keep a real bird!,下图描绘的是现在人类面临的窘境。请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述这种现象，说明其产生的原因及后果，并发表你的看法。,Nowadays, human beings are fa
12、ced with an embarrassing situation. In the cartoon, we can see a man talking to a paper bird kept in his cage and beside him is a vast desert dotted with endless tree roots. Obviously, birds have lost their homes as people have cut down all the trees. As a result, humans have lost their animal frien
13、ds. The scene may seem ridiculous and unbelievable to us, but it may become a reality in the future if we go on developing economy regardless of the,damage caused to the environment. Now in some places, trees have been cut down without limits. Some scientists say that there will be no vast forests i
14、n 20 or 30 years and many species will die out. It is really a terrible thing. Therefore, we should realize the importance of environmental protection and live in harmony with our animal friends.,随着人民生活水平的提高，人们愈发关注食品质量安全。“三鹿”奶粉事件引起人们广泛关注：商家的社会责任感与企业道德，人们健康的相关法律保证。 根据下图写一篇150词左右的短文。可以切合题意有所发挥。短文首句已给出
15、，不记入总词数。,As we can see from the cartoon, manufacturers, milk stations, milk cows and even grass are trying in vain to make excuses for the misconduct. After careful consideration, we come to realize that the drawer wishes to call our attention to the lack of social responsibility and business ethics
16、. With the change of peoples ideology, people take it for granted that we make a fortune. Driven by the pursuit of profit, some manufacturers go to extremes to make money by providing,the customers with fake or inferior products. A case in point is “Sanlu milk powder”, which is confirmed to contain
17、a poisonous chemical. As a result, numerous innocent infants become the victims of the milk food. In the long run, such illegal acts not only damage the dairy industry, but the credibility of the social mechanism. To my mind, it is high time we took effective measures to prevent such crime from happ
18、ening again. It is advisable to pass related laws to punish,whoever produces poisonous food. Only in this way can we establish a harmonious society where manufactures take up more social responsibility and credibility and people enjoy healthy food.,2010年1月份，上海同济、华师大、华东理工、上外和东华等6所高校，在自主招生的理科考试中无一例外地选
19、择了放弃考语文。根据这一现象结合下图谈谈你的看法。 提示：1) 英语是国际交流的工具 2）世界上学汉语的的人越来越多 3）母语的重要,Recently, six universities in Shanghai made English language compulsory in their joint exams, and left out Chinese. There is no doubt that the English language is a very important medium of education. But that is no reason why we sho
20、uld forget the importance of our mother tongue and traditions and culture. It is the Chinese language that makes China a nation. Once we have a thought that our mother tongue is not important, our,nation will be in danger. With the development of China, Chinese has become a worldwide language. Many
21、people in the world start to learn Chinese. Being the Chinese, we should feel proud of our mother tongue. Chinese is one of the oldest languages in the world. You should love your mother language if you want to love your nation.,Therefore, we should view our mother tongue as a necessity. Only throug
22、h our own language can our culture find glory it truly deserves.,下图反映的是网络时代所出现的一种问题，有些孩子沉溺于网上交流而忽视了与父母的沟通。请你根据对该漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。该文应包含以下要点：,1该漫画告诉了我们什么；2你对此现象的看法 3我们该如何主动和父母亲沟通。 漫画caricature,Modern technology has many advantages. While we enjoy the fun and convenience of the Internet, we also experienc
23、e some new problems. This caricature describes one of them. It shows that the teenage boy is enjoying chatting online so much that he refuses to talk to his parent. I think it might be common, but it is totally unacceptable. Nothing can replace face-to-face communication no matter how easy or intere
24、sting it is for us to chat with people from across the world on the Internet.,In most Chinese families, there is only one child. Obviously, we are the centre of our parents attention. Many parents are willing to do anything to make sure that we live a good life. It is understandable that they want t
25、o know whats happening to us, what kind of friends we make and how we are getting on with our studies.,I think we should let them know us well. For example, we can tell them whats going on in school when we have dinner or turn to them for advice when we have problems. In that way, Im sure the relati
26、onship between us and our parents will become better and better.,请根据下列表格中所提供的材料，结合你的生活经历，展开想象，以学生的身份用英语写一篇短文。,We all have some keys in life, some visible and others invisible. Visible keys play an important part in our life, making our life convenient and comfortable. If we lose them by accident, we
27、 tend to get into a mess.,The same is true of invisible keys in the course of our study and growth. Teachers guidance is of great benefit to our gaining knowledge. Parents words of comfort and encouragement help us build up confidence. With the help of our friends, were likely to overcome difficulty
28、 and succeed. We feel greatly honored to have access to these invisible keys , which are priceless gifts in our daily life.,In a word, a key is to a man what water is to fish. Whether the keys are visible or invisible, they are well worth treasuring. Only by making full use of them can we open the d
29、oor of success and make great contributions to our society.,左图描绘的是某家心理诊疗所医生正向病人介绍治病良方的漫画。请你根据对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，并发表你的看法。,“In just six hours you will be cured of your fear of snakes, heights, small spaces and commitment.”,As we can see from the picture, a person was persuaded into a small cage by the t
30、wo men down. The cage, with some snakes inside, was high up on four columns. He was told that he would be cured of his fear of snakes, heights, small spaces and commitment in just six hours in that way. According to my understanding, the picture is describing a person with some mental disability. He
31、 prefers to stay in large spaces with others company. The two men down are very,good doctors, trying to help cure the person of his illnesses. Instead of giving him some medicine, they had their own way of treating this patient, having him face his mental problems directly. The doctors think it more difficult for such patients to recover if they are only treated by means of pleasing them. I think life is full of ups and downs. One cant step away from challenges or avoid responsibility. On the contrary, we should face them with courage and wisdom.,
