1、Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Part Three,Text Appreciation,ENTER,B,T,L,E,W,Text Appreciation,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Text analysis 1. Theme2. Structure3. Further discussion II. Writing devices ParallelismIII. Sentence paraphrase,Contents,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Text Analysis,For Mandela
2、, gardening is the source of spiritual fulfillment. Gardening gives Mandela inspiration for his revolutionary cause. Political leaders are like gardeners.,The theme is summed up at the very end.,The end of Theme.,B,T,L,E,W,Part 1 (para. 1- ) about:Part 2 (para.9- ) about:,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,
3、Text Analysis,8,11,It describes Mandelas gardening experience. It shows how Mandela takes this hobby as a survival strategy.,It goes further to explain the significance of his gardening experience, which has become a metaphor and gives him inspiration on how to be a good revolutionary leader and how
4、 to nourish important human relationship.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Text Analysis,Question 1: What can we know from Para. 1?Mandela introduces readers to the topic of his writing, that is, gardening but at the same time, he also discusses how he spent the day. He spent the day talking wit
5、h his comrades about his political cause. So readers can see that his political cause accounts for a lot in Mandelas life in prison. And thats why Mandela could get inspirations from his hobbygardening in prison.,To be continued on the next page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Text Analysis,Qu
6、estion 2: What role does Para. 2 play in the first part?In this paragraph, Mandela tells readers he has well adapted himself to the life in prison. And the small things inside prison are also a source of his pride. Thus readers can see that gardening has already become a kind of survival strategy. G
7、ardening gives him satisfaction, offers a taste of freedom, and makes him strong physically and mentally. It is a way to defy the enemys attempt to crush him spiritually.,To be continued on the next page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Text Analysis,Question 3: What is the role of Para. 8 in t
8、he first part?From para. 3 to para. 7, Mandela illustrates gardening in detail. In para. 8, Mandela comes to a conclusion as to the role gardening plays in his life in prison. Thus this paragraph corresponds with para. 2.,To be continued on the next page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Text An
9、alysis,Question 4: In some way, I saw the garden as a metaphor for certain aspects of my life. What is being compared? How does “the garden” enter into the comparison? (Para. 9)Mandela compares the garden with leaders political cause. In particular, he is here comparing his gardening with his respon
10、sibility in the revolutionary cause. Like in gardening, in his struggle as a revolutionary leader, he also has to plant seeds, cultivate, take care of the fruit trees he has planted, until in the end he harvests the result. Both of them need care, cultivation, eradication if necessary, and harvest.
11、The only difference is that they have different soil. For gardeners, they work on soil, whereas for leaders, the soil is the political cause.,To be continued on the next page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Text Analysis,Mandela seems to be talking about his relations with his followers in gen
12、eral, and his relations with his wife in particular. When differences occur, a leader should always try to resolve these differences. However, if these differences concern matters of principle and cannot be reconciled, a leader must resolutely part with those people, as one has to eliminate the weed
13、s in ones garden.,To be continued on the next page.,Question 5: Like gardeners, leaders must take responsibility for what they cultivateand eliminate what cannot succeed. (Para. 9) What does Mandela imply by saying it?,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Text Analysis,Here Mandela obviously alludes
14、 to his relationship with his wife. If not properly looked after and nourished, it would perish.,To be continued on the next page.,Question 6: Why does Mandela write to Winnie two letters about a particularly beautiful tomato plant ? (Para. 10),B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Text Analysis,On t
15、he one hand, Mandela wants to have a harmonious relationship with his wife. He does not want to see what has happened to the beautiful tomato plant happens to his marriage. But on the other hand, he feels powerless to nourish his relationship with his wife. Here many of the most important relationsh
16、ips refer specifically to his relationship with his wife.,To be continued on the next page.,Question 7: I dont know what she read into that letter, but when I wrote it I had a mixture of feelings? (Para. 11),B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,What did Mandela say one should do if he wanted to surv
17、ive in prison? What made him feel fulfilled? How did he keep his mind active and his body fit? What did he usually do to amuse himself? Had Mandela ever owned a garden before? What was his first experience at gardening? Did he enjoy it? Why or why not? Was he able to cut out a big garden? What was t
18、he soil like? Was it easy to start a garden in the courtyard? What did Mandela have to do to find enough room for growing plants?,Text Analysis,To be continued on the next page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,What did Mandela plant at first? Why did he choose those hardy plants? Where did he g
19、et the seeds? Why do you think the authorities were so kind to him? Did he have good harvests at first? Did they improve later? How did Mandela make his garden flourish? Did Mandela do his gardening according to the books? Why or why not? How did he do it then? Did he always succeed? Retell the stor
20、y in your own words.,Text Analysis,The end of Further Discussion.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Writing Devices,I could now spend the day reading, writing letters, discussing issues with my comrades, or preparing legal documents. (1),Similarity of structure in a pair or series of related word
21、s, phrases, or clauses,Four gerund phrases are coordinated used as the prepositional object.,To be continued on the next page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Writing Devices,One can feel fulfilled by washing ones clothes so that they are particularly clean, by sweeping a hallway so that it is
22、empty of dust, by organizing ones cell to save as much space as possible. (2),Three prepositional phrases introduced by “by” are coordinated used as adverbial of manner,To be continued on the next page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Writing Devices,To plant a seed, watch it grow, to tend it a
23、nd then harvest it, offered a simple but enduring satisfaction. (8),In this sentence, four infinitive phrases are used together as the subject of the sentence to describe the work involved in gardening so as to impress readers.,To be continued on the next page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,W
24、riting Devices,They must mind their work, try to drive back enemies, save what can be saved, and eliminate what cannot succeed. (9),Four verbs are coordinated as the predicate of the sentence to illustrate what leaders need to do.,To be continued on the next page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garde
25、n,Writing Devices,Please compare the following two sentences. Are there any differences? In which sentence is the meaning well-conveyed? When it finally died, I removed the roots from the soil, washed them, and buried them in a corner of the garden. When it finally died, I buried them in a corner of
26、 the garden.,To be continued on the next page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Writing Devices,When it finally died, I removed the roots from the soil, washed them, and buried them in a corner of the garden. (10),Three verbs are coordinated as the predicate of the main clause to show what Mande
27、la did after the tomato plant died. Thus it can show Mandelas feelings toward the death of the plantsad. Because the story is an allusion to his relationship with his wife, we can see his feeling and attitude toward their relationship.,To be continued on the next page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas
28、Garden,Writing Devices,parallelism of words: She tried to make her pastry fluffy, sweet, and delicate. parallelism of phrases: Singing a song or writing a poem is joyous. parallelism of clauses: Perch are inexpensive; cod are cheap; trout are abundant; but salmon are best.,To be continued on the nex
29、t page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Writing Devices,Please revise the following sentences into parallel structures. 1. I enjoy biking and to walk down by the pier.I enjoy biking and walking down by the pier. 2. Boy Scouts at the camp can learn cooking, canoeing, swimming, or how to make rop
30、es.,To be continued on the next page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Writing Devices,Boy Scouts at the camp can learn cooking, canoeing, swimming, or rope-making. 3. Non-traditional students often study long hours, get limited sleep, and up again with the sunrise.Non-traditional students often
31、 study long hours, get limited sleep, and are up again with the sunrise.,To be continued on the next page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Writing Devices,4. The hurricane not only destroyed the fishing fleet but also the homes of the fishermen.The hurricane destroyed not only the fishing fleet
32、 but also the homes of the fishermen.,To be continued on the next page.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Writing Devices,5. Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method, while now the laboratory method is employed.Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method; now it is taught by th
33、e laboratory method. 6. Its a time not for words, but action.Its a time not for words, but for action.,The end of Writing Devices.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Sentence Paraphrase 1,In early 1977, the authorities announced the end of manual labor and arrange some type of work for us to do in
34、 the courtyard, so we could spend our days in our section. (1),the part of prison where Mandela stayed,go to 2,the people in charge, referring to the prison authorities,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Sentence Paraphrase 2,The end of manual labor was liberating. (1),Mandela is talking about for
35、ced labor. He felt liberated after the manual labor had been ended.,The present participle of the verb is used as an adjective to express the idea of “making sb feel liberated”. Here the word can not be replaced by “liberated”,go to 3,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Sentence Paraphrase 2,Fill i
36、n the blanks with the appropriate form of the word given. I was _ to hear the story of his travels in South Africa. (fascinate) The book offers a _glimpse of the lives of the rich and famous. (fascinate) I was _ by all the cards my friends sent me when I was in hospital. (touch) The way she looked a
37、fter her little sister was really _. (touch),back to 2,1. fascinated2. fascinating3. touched 4. touching,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Sentence Paraphrase 3,I could now spend the day reading, writing letters, discussing issues with my comrades, or preparing legal documents. (1),Mandela did no
38、t ask for a lawyer. He had decided to be his own lawyer.,Note the phrase “spend some time on sth/(in) doing sth,go to 4,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Sentence Paraphrase 4,To survive in prison, one must develop ways to take satisfaction in ones daily life. (2),to learn to enjoy (doing) sth ta
39、ke pride/delight in sth.,not to die in an accident or war, or from an illness, or under extremely harsh conditions,In order not to die and go on living in prison, prisoners must cultivate ways to learn to enjoy themselves in their daily life.,go to 5,general reference referring to no one in particul
40、ar. Its a formal usage. In informal writing or speech, “you” is used.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Sentence Paraphrase 5,But eventually they gave in, and we were able to cut out a small garden on a narrow patch of earth against the far wall. (3),mark out/off,But finally they agreed unwilling
41、ly, and we were able to mark out a small garden on a strip of earth against the wall in the distance.,go to 6,unwilling agreed,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Sentence Paraphrase 6,The courtyard had been constructed over a garbage dump, and in order to start my garden, I had to remove a great m
42、any rocks to allow the plants room to grow. (4),A place where garbage is unloaded and left,used as adverbial of purpose,go to 7,to take away,space (U),B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Sentence Paraphrase 7,At the time, some of my comrades joked that I was a miner at heart, for I spent my days in
43、 a wasteland and my free time digging in the courtyard. (4),At that time, some of my comrades said jokingly that I was really a miner since I spent my days in a land which had been deserted for a long time and my spare time digging in the courtyard.,Here “for” is a conjunction used to introduce adve
44、rbial clause of reason, the comma before “for” can not be deleted.,go to 8,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Sentence Paraphrase 8,The authorities did not regret giving permission, for once the garden began to flourish, I often provided the warders with some of my best tomatoes and onions. (5),Th
45、e person in charge didnt feel regretful that they had allowed me to have a garden because as soon as the garden began to grow well, I often gave the warders some of my best tomatoes and onions.,go to 9,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Sentence Paraphrase 9,While I have always enjoyed gardening,
46、it was not until I was behind bars that I was able to tend my own gardens. (6),to look after,in prison,go to 10,Its a conjunction used to introduce adverbial clause of concession, which is put before the main clause,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Sentence Paraphrase 10,Once I was in Johannesbu
47、rg studying and then working, I had neither the time nor the space to start a garden. (6),used to introduce adverbial clause of time,go to 11,“neithernor”is used when two facts, states or actions, etc. are mentioned and both are not true or not possible.,Here they are two present participle phrases
48、used as adverbial to describe something which is happening right at the same time.,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Sentence Paraphrase 11,I did not have many of the materials that the books discussed, but I learned through trial and error. (7),by testing different methods in order to find the b
49、est one,go to 12,It is a relative pronoun used to introduce attributive clause to modify the materials to function as the object of “discussed”,B,T,L,E,W,Lesson 7 - Mandelas Garden,Sentence Paraphrase 12,I told her this small story at great length. I do not know what she read into that letter, (11),I told her this small story in detail. I do not know whether she understood the meaning of the letter more than it did.,
