1、,大学英语四级测试作文评分原则及标准,一 。 评分原则,1。 CET-4作文题采用总体评分方法. 阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分.而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分,2。 从内容到语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判. 要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想。也要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍， 用词和造句是否清楚而确切的表达思想。,二。 评分标准,1。 本题满分为15分。,2。 阅卷标准共分五等：2分， 5分， 8分， 11分， 14分。,2分-条理不清.思路紊乱.语言支离破碎.大部分句子有错误。且多数为严重错误。,5分-基本切题,表达思想不够清楚, 连贯性差,有较多严重的语言错误。,8分-基本切题,
2、表达思想比较清楚,文章尚连贯,但语言错误较多，,11分-切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯， 但有少量语言错误。,14分- 切题,表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本上无语言错误。,3。 评分标准,4。 字数不足者应酌情扣分。,累计字数在 81-89之间. 扣1分。 71-80之间.扣2分。 61-70之间.扣3分。51-60之间.扣4分。 50字以下.最多给5分。 100-119扣1分;90-99扣3分;80-89扣4分;70-79扣5分;60-69扣6分;50-59扣7分;不足50扣9分。,5。 只写一段者：0-4分， 只写两段者：0-9分，,2001年6月 Part V Writing (
3、20 minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a letter. Suppose you are Zhang Ying. Write a letter to Xiao Wang, a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday. You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below
4、 in Chinese. 1.表示欢迎 2.提出度假安排的建议 3.提醒应注意的事项 A Letter to a Schoolmate June 23, 2001 Dear Xiao Wang, Yours, Zhang Ying,分析样卷1 A Letter to a Schoolmate,You cant imagine how happy I was when I heard that you would come to visit me. We havent seen each other for a long time, so I amcounting the days.,I hav
5、e arranged a schedule for our holiday. You havent been to Shanghai before. When you see it, you will be hard to believe your eyes.Shanghai is very modern. First, we will go out for shopping, and then gosome sight-seeings, such as Yu Yuan Garden and People square. If you like, we can go to see some o
6、ld friends. I bet they will be as happy as I amwhen seeing you. Do you like the suggestion I made above? If there is something unsuitable, we will talk about them when you arrive. OK?,Oh, please remember to bring your winter clothes with you, because Shanghai is a little bit colder than siChuan.Reme
7、mber me to your parents.,have arranged a schedule,you will be hard to believe your eye,go out for shopping,go,some sight-seeings, such as,People square.,Oh,修改分析样卷1 A Letter to a SchoolmateYou cant imagine how happy I was when I heard that you would come to visit me. We havent seen each other for a l
8、ong time, so I am counting the days.I have arranged a schedule for our holiday.(have draw up a schedule for your holiday.). (As you)You havent been to Shanghai before. (I guess the first thing youd like to do is make a tour of the city.You will find it hard to believe your eyes when you see it, for
9、it is very modern now.)When you see it, you will be hard to believe your eyes. Shanghai is very modern. First, we will go out for shopping, and then go some sight-seeings,( So first, we will go sightseeing, such as ( visiting)Yu Yuan Garden and ( the )People(s) square. ( Then we will do some shoppin
10、g.) If you like, we can go( and) to see some old friends. I bet they will be as happy as I am ( to) when seeing you. ( What do you think of )Do you like the suggestion I made above? If there is something unsuitable, we will talk about ( it )them when you arrive. OK?,( By the way, dont forget to brin
11、g )Oh, please remember to bring your winter clothes with you, because Shanghai is a little bit colder than SiChuan.(Remember to give my regards) Remember me to your parents.,评析：11分,优点： 内容切题，提纲要求的三个方面都写到了，文字简洁，层次清楚，语言错误比较少。,不足之处：1 文章的组织不够严密。2 句子结构和词语搭配上都有一些错误。,A Letter to a Schoolmate 分析样卷2Im very gl
12、ad that you will come to see me during the week-long holiday. We have not seen each other for two years. So this time we canspend the holiday together will make me so happy.Since you left Shanghai two years ago, Shanghai has changed a lot. The city is more beautiful and buildings are higher. You wil
13、l surely superise the changes. I have helped you to make some arrangments during the holiday. We can go shopping in Nanjing Road which is the best road of Shanghai. We can go to peoples square and history museum to visit. We can also visit the jingMao Building which is the highest building of China.
14、 Shanghai has many new and good place we can visit. The time table of visit we can make when you come.What do you think of my advice.By the way, you should telephone me when you come to Shanghai, I will meet you in the railway station. Im waiting for your come.,A Letter to a Schoolmate 分析样卷2Im very
15、glad that you will come to see me during the week-long holiday. We have not seen each other for two years. So this time we canspend the holiday together will make me so happy.,Since you left Shanghai two years ago, Shanghai has changed a lot. The city is more beautiful and buildings are higher. You
16、will surely superise the changes. I have helped you to make some arrangments during the holiday. We can go shopping in Nanjing Road which is the best road of Shanghai. We can go to peoples square and history museum to visit. We can also visit the jingMao Building which is the highest building of Chi
17、na. Shanghai has many new and good place we can visit. The time table of visit we can make when you come.What do you think of my advice.,By the way, you should telephone me when you come to Shanghai, I will meet you in the railway station. Im waiting for your come.,A Letter to a Schoolmate (修改分析样卷2)
18、 Im very glad that you will come to see me during the week-long holiday. We have not seen each other for two years. （The fact that we can spend the holiday together this time will make me so happy.) So this time we can spend the holiday together will make me so happy. ( Shanghai has changed a lot si
19、nce you left it two years age.)Since you left Shanghai two years ago, Shanghai has changed a lot. The city is more beautiful and buildings are higher. (You will surely be surprised at the changes.)You will surely superise the changes. I have helped you to make some arrangments during (arrangements f
20、or your) the holiday. We can go shopping in Nanjing Road which is the ( business center) best road of Shanghai. We can go to ( the Peoples Square and visit the History Museum) peoples square and history museum to visit. We can also visit the JingMao Building which is the highest building of China. S
21、hanghai has many new and ( good places)good place we can visit. The time table of visit we can make when you come( We can makeset up a timetable when you come.).What do you think of (it)my advice.,By the way, you should telephone me when you come to Shanghai, I will meet you (at)in the railway stati
22、on. Im waiting for your come.(Im looking forward to your arrival.),评析：8分,优点： 内容切题，条理基本清楚，前后也还连贯，作者基本上能表达自己的意思，读者也基本上能看懂。,不足之处：该考生对英语语法和词汇的掌握还需要进一步提高，文章中句子结构上的严重错误较多，有明显的按中文语序造句的痕迹。,分析样卷3 A Letter to a SchoolmateI am delighted to learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long holiday. My p
23、arents will also be happy to see you again. I am sure you will enjoy every minute here.I know you are fond of swimming. A river lies not far away from my home.We can go swimming there. I think it would be very pleasant and refreshing to swim in such hot summer days. In every big room of my home ther
24、e is an air-conditioner, we can watch TV, play VCDs or read books very comfortably at home.A mountain. about two miles away from here there is beautiful and it is worth touring. We can go there on foot. When we climb to the top of the mountain,we can have a wonderful bird-eye view of the whole villa
25、ge.Just phone me before you set off. There is no need for you to take anything. Ill prepare everything for you.I am looking forward to seeing you soon.,修改分析样卷3 A Letter to a SchoolmateI am delighted to learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long holiday. My parents will also be happy t
26、o see you again. I am sure you will enjoy every minute here.I know you are fond of swimming. A river lies not far away from my home.We can go swimming there. I think it would be very pleasant and refreshing to swim in such hot summer days. ( Besides)In every big room of my home there is an air-condi
27、tioner, we can watch TV, play VCDs or read books very comfortably at home.A mountain. about two miles away from here there is beautiful and it is worth touring.( About two miles away from here there is a beautiful mountain and it is worth climbing.). We can go there on foot. When we climb to the top
28、 of the mountain(reach its top.),we can have a wonderful bird-eye(birds-eye) view of the whole village.,Just phone me before you set off. There is no need for you to take anything. Ill prepare everything for you.I am looking forward to seeing you soon.,评析：14分,优点： 内容切题，提纲要求的三个方面都写到了，文字简洁流畅，连贯性较好，其文体亦
29、是个人书信常用的口语体。该考生语法概念清楚，句子结构正确，词语搭配基本符合英美人的习惯。,不足之处：1. touring 应为 climbing.2. Bird-eye view 应为 birds-eye view.3 第2段第4句和第5句之间的连接需加一个转折词。如：besides,in addition, in the meantime.,分析样卷4 A Letter to a SchoolmateI have know you will come to Shanghai. Three years ago, you went to the England. From then, we ha
30、vent meet with each other. I welcome that you can return your country.From your letter, I have known you have a week-long holiday. There is a great change in Shanghai. I think you must be feel suprised with whatyou see. So I advise you vist some place,that we often went ago. And you can visit some o
31、ld-classmates. They also mise you very much.If you dont want to hotel, you can live in my home.Youd better buy a map. Im afraid you will be at a lost. But even if you cant find bus stop,you still can go to anywhere by taxi. I hope you will have an unforgetableholiday.,分析样卷4 A Letter to a SchoolmateI
32、 have know you will come to Shanghai. Three years ago, you went to the England. From then, we havent meet with each other. I welcome that you can return your country.From your letter, I have known you have a week-long holiday. There is a great change in Shanghai. I think you must be feel suprised wi
33、th whatyou see. So I advise you vist some place,that we often went ago. And you can visit some old-classmates. They also mise you very much.If you dont want to hotel, you can live in my home.Youd better buy a map. Im afraid you will be at a lost. But even if you cant find bus stop,you still can go to anywhere by taxi. I hope you will have an unforgetableholiday.,评析：5分内容基本切题，但由于语言错误很多，且多为严重错误。使得作者无法把思想表达清楚。文章的连贯性自然也很差，只能得5分。象这样的考生，在写的能力上与大纲要求还有相当大的距离，须花大力气迎头赶上。,
