1、大学英语四级写作解析,英语教研中心 王祥熙,2,四级考试大纲写作要求,能在阅读难度与课文相仿的书面材料时做笔记、回答问题和写提纲，能就一定的话题或提纲在半小时内写出120-150词的短文，能写短信或便条，表达意思清楚，无重大语言错误。,3,四级作文评分原则,1. CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求，对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。 2. CET作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring) 方法，阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分(reward scores), 而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。,4,四级作文评分原则,3.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语
2、言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。 4. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分;该给低分给低分，包括零分。一名阅卷人员在所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。,5,四级作文评分标准,1.本题满分为15分 2.阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。 3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数则可加一分(即9分)或减一分
3、(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。,6,四级作文评分标准,4. 字数不足应酌情扣分： 累计字数 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 70-79 60-69 50-59 49 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 9 (1)如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句，均 不得计入所写字数。 (2)规定的内容未写全者，按比例扣分。 (3)如果扣为0分，要慎重处理。,7,四级作文题目,Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witness account of a traffic acciden
4、t. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点： 1车祸发生的时间及地点 2你所见到的车祸情况 3你对车祸原因的分析,8,四级作文评分标准及样卷,2分： 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有 错误，且多数为严重错误。样卷 5分： 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重 语言错误。样卷 8分： 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重
5、错误。样卷,9,四级作文评分标准及样卷,11分： 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言 错误。样卷 14分： 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好， 基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。样卷,10,四级作文2分样卷,I saw the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road. The Traffic Accident has been at the morning, May 1 Two children by bike went to school. A car is so fast, the streel. And the car touched two ch
6、ildren by bike, and the Traffic Accident has happened. One is touched so far way and the other is put down. Mary people come here, and they sent to two children who go to Hospiton.,11,四级作文2分样卷,Wait a time, The ploiemen arriverd in the Accident place. My opiontoin: The car driver is so fast by car, a
7、nd He didnt attendation to the children by bike aside the road. Two children by bike didnt heared the car come. All of above, I think the car driver must be serier the Traffic Accident.,12,四级作文5分样卷,It was 8:00 this morning, I went on my way to school. When I just at the school gate, I saw the terrib
8、le traffic accident happend. A student ride his bike in a high speed, and just when he arrived the school gate, a large truck traveled out of the gate and hit him down. He flied over 3m before his bike hit him on the ground. Surely, the poor boy was hurt very bad.,13,四级作文5分样卷,I think there are two r
9、easons for the accident. First, it was just the time we began our first class, the bike rider perhaps did not want to be late, he ride his bike so fast, even didnt low down his speed at the gate. Secend, the truck is too large, and at that time, there were too many people walk through the gate, so t
10、he bike driver have no other way to chose, but to ride in the middle of the road.,14,四级作文8分样卷,The trafic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways when I was driving my car home at about 4 oclock. The yellow car involed in the accident was running at a high speed along the right-hand
11、when it happened. Hardly it reached the junction when it cracked with a truck running from another direction. There was no time for the drivers to change the directions.,15,四级作文8分样卷,I think the accident mostly attributed to such reasons: Firstly and the foremost, it was the carelessness of both of t
12、he drivers that mostly made the accidents happen. It was not too careful for them when running a car. Secondly, the weather also should be responsible for it. The fog made the vision of drivers vague. Last but not the least, the constructure of the roads was unreasonable. The trafic lights are neede
13、d at any junctions.,16,四级作文11分样卷,It was last Friday morning. The accident happened when I was on my way to school. It was so terrible that I would never forget it. I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the road. Then, with a big sound, the accident happened. The red car sto
14、ped suddenly on the road so that the driver of following car couldnt respond immiditely. The back of the red car was badly damaged, but fortunately there was no people injured in this accident.,17,四级作文11分样卷,I think the main reasons are as follows: First of all, the red car shouldnt stop suddenly wit
15、hout any signals. Secondly, the following car should keep a certain distance from the front car so that the driver could have enough time to take measurs when any badly situation. Finally, these two drivers were careless. If they had paid more attention to driving, this accident wouldnt have happene
16、d.,18,四级作文14分样卷,It was the morning of April 6th, 2003. At about 7:30, I went to school by bike as usual. It was a rainy day and the road was slippery. On the way, I noticed a boy riding in front of me, talking loudly with his friends. He didnt wear a raincoat; instead he held an umbrella in one hand
17、, and rode with another hand. As he turned left to Guangming Road, he failed to see a car coming from behind a truck parked on the corner. Suddenly I heard a big noise and saw an umbrella thrown away. The boy was knocked down by the car. I was completely shocked.,19,四级作文14分样卷,I think the boys absent
18、-mindedness accounted much for the accident. He was talking all the time and dangerously used an umbrella while riding a bike. The weather also played a role in the tragedy. The third cause was the unproperly parked truck, which was big enough to make the road conditions invisible to the students who were going to make a turn. All these contributed to this accident.,
