1、Nice to meet you!,1,anniversary,（1917-2017）,To make our school more attractive, do you have any suggestions?,Who can make our suggestions come true ?,headmaster,How should we give suggestions to him?,By talking to him directly or some other ways?,By writing a letter of suggestion,How should we give
2、suggestions to him?,Persuasive Writing,Letter of Suggestion,Unit1 Art,Read the sample writing quickly and find out whether we have missed something.,April 27, 2015,Dear headmaster,Im Li Hua. Im writing to advice you to make some changes about our school library. First of all, it would be better if t
3、he library is equipped with better central air conditioner, because it is beneficial for us to concentrate on our study. Furthermore, as is known to us, drinking much water is crucial to our health, so my suggestion is that there should be a water dispenser in every reading room . Last but not least
4、, I would like to suggest that the library should be open to the students on weekends. I do hope you can take my suggestions into consideration and make reforms in the library, so the library may take on a new look as soon as possible.,Looking forward to your reply.,Sincerely,Li Hua,April 27, 2015,D
5、ate,Dear headmaster,Beginning,Im Li Hua. Im writing to advice you to make some changes about our school library. First of all, it would be better if the library is equipped with better central air conditioner, because it is beneficial for us to concentrate on our study. Furthermore, as is known to u
6、s, drinking much water is crucial to our health, so my suggestion is that there should be a water dispenser in every reading room. Last but not least, I would like to suggest that the library should be open to the students on weekends. I do hope you can take my suggestions into consideration and mak
7、e reforms in the library, so the library may take on a new look as soon as possible.,Body,Looking forward to your reply.,Ending,Sincerely,Li Hua,Signature,Paragraph 1,Paragraph 2,Paragraph 3,Self-introduction,The purpose of writing,suggestion 1,reason 1,suggestion 2,reason 2,To express your hope,Use
8、ful Expressions有用的表达,First of all, it would be better if the library is equipped with better central air conditioner, because it is beneficial for us to concentrate on our study. Furthermore , as is known to us, drinking much water is important to our health, so my suggestion is that there should be
9、 a water dispenser in every reading room. Last but not least , I would like to suggest that the library should be open to the students on weekends.,First of all,Furthermore,Last but not least,because,air conditioner,We would like to have air conditioners in our classrooms, because,The school _ provi
10、de us with air conditioners in our classrooms，because,should,Swimming Pool,We would like to have a swimming pool，because,The school _ build a swimming pool, because,should, We would like to have washing machines in our dormitories, because, The school should provide us with water heaters, because,wa
11、shing machine,water heater,1.Work in groups of six, discuss and give 2-3 suggestions and reasons about our school . 2.Write a letter to the headmaster.3.You will be given 10 minutes.,Writing Time,to make our school more attractive,Hours,Minutes,Seconds,Writing Time,Hours,Minutes,Seconds,Writing Time
12、,Hours,Minutes,Seconds,Writing Time,Hours,Minutes,Seconds,Writing Time,Hours,Minutes,Seconds,Writing Time,Hours,Minutes,Seconds,Writing Time,Hours,Minutes,Seconds,Writing Time,Hours,Minutes,Seconds,Writing Time,Hours,Minutes,Seconds,Writing Time,Hours,Minutes,Seconds,Writing Time,Self-assessment(自我评
13、价),Whose suggestions do you like most?,layout(结构)useful expressions,How to write a letter of suggestion,Summary,Homework:,Write a letter of suggestion about this class to me at ,The transitional words(衔接词) that may help you to connect the clauses:firstly, secondly, thirdlyfinallyon the one hand, on the other hand;first of all, furthermore, last but not least,1.had better do sth.2. I would like to do sth.3. Its a good idea to do sth.4. If I were you, I would do sth.5. I suggest that should6. I think it would be more beneficial（有益的） if you could,Paragraph2,
