1、,2014北京高考作文第二节（20 分） 假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。 注意：1. 词数不少于 60. 2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. _,1,the parking place caught my attention,students with their bikes crowded at the entrance,worrie
2、d about it,There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. Last Monday when I was about to park my bike, students with their bikes crowded at the entrance of the parking place caught my attention. As a member of our school, of course, I was worried about it.,要点,细节,添加,Some of my c
3、lassmates were also concerned about the issue. So after class in the afternoon, we surrounded a table, discussing how to solve the problem and wrote a letter of advice to our schoolmaster.,discuss the matter,surrounded a tablewrote a letter of advice,concerned about the issue,要点,细节,添加,As soon as the
4、 discussion ended, one of my classmates and I hurried to the office of our schoolmaster and handed the report to him. He read it seriously and spoke highly of us. Finally, to our great excitement, he accepted our suggestions.,handed the report,to the office,accepted our suggestions,要点,细节,添加,Soon aft
5、erwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place so that we could get into the bike shed smoothly. At the sight of students entering the shed in two lines neatly, I smiled happily / had a strong sense of achievement.,a second entrance was opened,get into the bike shed smoothly,had a strong
6、 sense of achievement,要点,细节,添加,范文1 There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. Last Monday when I was about to park my bike, students with their bikes crowded at the entrance of the parking place caught my attention. As a member of our school, of course, I was worried about i
7、t. Some of my classmates were also concerned about the issue. So after class in the afternoon, we surrounded a table, discussing how to solve the problem and wrote a letter of advice to our schoolmaster.,As soon as the discussion ended, one of my classmates and I hurried/ wasted no time going to the
8、 office of our schoolmaster and handed the report to him. He read it seriously and spoke highly of us. Finally, to our great excitement, he accepted our suggestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place so that we could get into the bike shed smoothly. At the sight of s
9、tudents entering the shed in two lines neatly, I smiled happily / had a strong sense of achievement.,范文2 There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. I noticed the entrance was small and almost blocked. So my classmates and I had a discussion and wrote a report. Then we went t
10、o meet the schoolmaster in his office and gave the report to him. He accepted our suggestions. Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. Now it is easy to park our bikes there.,The next afternoon, with one of my classmates, I wasted no time going to the office of our school
11、master. Having introduced who we were and why we appeared there, we handed the letter to the schoolmaster. He read it seriously and spoke highly of us. Finally, to our excitement, he accepted our suggestion.You must have seen the ending - a second gate was built next to the old one a week later so t
12、hat we could get into the bike shed smoothly. At the sight of students entering the shed in two lines neatly, I had a strong sense of achievement.It was such an unforgettable experience, in which I realized that we could make a difference by doing a little bit for our school.,2013北京高考作文 第四部分：书面表达（共两
13、节，15分）第一节 情景作文（20分） 假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，用英文写一篇周记。记述爸爸出差期间，妈妈生病，你照顾她的过程。注意：1.周记的开头已经为你写好。2.词数不少于60. Last Monday,_ _,2,went on a trip,said goodbye toput his luggage into,要点,细节,be away for days,添加,Last Monday, after putting his luggage into the trunk of his car, my father said goodbye to
14、my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days.,Mother wasnt feeling well,要点,细节,添加,pale facerunning a fever,my duty to look after mum,Just the next morning, I found my mother wasnt feeling well. Looking at her pale face, I felt her forehead and knew she was running a h
15、igh fever. Now, it was my duty to look after my mum who had a bad cold.,my special care,添加,细节,要点,get her medicine prepared noodles,mother recovered,So, I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her. With my special care, it was not long before my mother recovered
16、.,praised me for my care of my mum,添加,细节,要点,with thumbs up,feel very happy,When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. With thumbs up, they praised me for my taking care of my mum. I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.,范文1 Last Monday, after putting his
17、 luggage into the trunk of his car, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days. Just the next morning, I found my mother wasnt feeling well. Looking at her pale face, I felt her forehead and knew she was running a high fever. Now, it was m
18、y duty to look after my mum who had a bad cold. So, I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her. With my special care, it was not long before my mother recovered. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. With thumbs up, they praised
19、me for my taking care of my mum. I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.,范文2 Last Monday, my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a business trip. He would be away for three days. Just the next morning, I found my mother wasnt feeling well. She had a cold. I immedi
20、ately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her. With my special care, my mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home, my mother told him what had happened. He praised me for what I had done.I feel very happy that I have done something for my mother.,2012北京高考作文
21、第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35分）情景作文（20分） 假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华, 校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根 据以下四幅图的先后顺序，将你所做的一件好事 以日记形式记述下来，向校报投稿。注意：1.日记的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于60。Saturday，June2 Fine This morning,3,saw travelers puzzled,添加,细节,要点,walking onreading,seemed they were lost.,This morning, I was walking on the street when I saw tha
22、t two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. It seemed they were lost.,went to help,添加,细节,要点,looking for the Temple of Heaven,went up to them and asked,I went up to them and asked how I could help. From what they said, I knew that they wanted to pay a visit to the Temple of Heaven.,led them
23、to the station,添加,细节,要点,Bus No. 20,get there directly,Therefore, I led them to the bus station and advised them to take Bus No. 20 so that they could get there directly.,waved good-bye,添加,细节,要点,the bus camegetting on ,felt a kind of satisfaction,It was not long before the bus came. We waved good-bye
24、 to each other when they were getting on the bus. Seeing them on the bus, I felt a kind of satisfaction.,范文1 This morning, I was walking on the street when I saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. It seemed they were lost. I went up to them and asked how I could help. From what
25、they said, I knew that they wanted to pay a visit to the Temple of Heaven. Therefore, I led them to the bus station and advised them to take Bus No. 20 so that they could get there directly. It was not long before the bus came. We waved good-bye to each other when they were getting on the bus. Seein
26、g them on the bus, I felt a kind of satisfaction.,范文2 This morning, when I was walking on the street, I saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. It seemed they were lost. I went up to them and asked how I could help. They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven. I led t
27、hem to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No. 20, the bus came. We waved good-bye to each other. Seeing them on the bus, I felt a kind of satisfaction.,2011年北京情景作文 假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华。下面四幅图表述了近期发生在你们班的一个真实故事，请根据图片的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，字数不少于60。,teacher fell down,添加,细节,要点,having a class h
28、urt her legs,astonished,Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class when suddenly the teacher lost her balance and with her high heels broken by the edge, she fell down and hurt her legs. Everyone was astonished at that time.,carried her on the back to the clinic,添加,细节,要点,with the help of some oth
29、ers,worried about her,Worried about her, one of the boys carried her on the back, with the help of some others, to the clinic without any delay.,visit her with flowers,添加,细节,要点,lying in bed right leg was broken,felt sorry for herHoped,It turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay i
30、n the hospital. The following day, we went to visit her with flowers. Seeing her lying in bed with leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon.,returned to the class,添加,细节,要点,clapped our hands,moved and proud of,This Thursday she returned to the class on a wh
31、eelchair to give us lessons. We clapped our hands and gave her a warm welcome. Seeing such a good teacher, we were all deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher.,范文1 Last Monday, we were having our Chinese class when suddenly the teacher lost her balance and with her high heels bro
32、ken by the edge, she fell down and hurt her legs. Everyone was astonished at that time. Worried about her, one of the boys carried her on the back, with the help of some others, to the clinic without any delay. It turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in the hospital. The foll
33、owing day, we went to visit her with flowers. Seeing her lying in bed with leg wrapped in bandages, we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon.,This Thursday she returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons. We clapped our hands and gave her a warm welcome. Seeing such a
34、 good teacher, we were all deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher.,范文2 Last Monday， we were having our Chinese class when the teacher suddenly slipped and fell. We were all worried about her. One of the boys carried her on the back， with the help of some others， to the clinic im
35、mediately. It turned out that her right leg was broken and she had to stay in the hospital. The following day， we went to visit her with flower and fruit. Seeing her lying in bed with leg wrapped in bandages， we felt sorry for her and hoped that she would recover soon. This Thursday she returned to
36、the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons. We were all deeply moved and proud of having such a responsible teacher.,2010年北京情景作文 假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。 注意：1周记的开头已为你写好。 2词数不少于60。 Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to B
37、eidaihe. _,searched the Internet for ,添加,细节,要点,train schedule; the weather; hotel information,On the morning;together with my grandparents,Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train
38、schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information.,buy two tickets,添加,细节,要点,train station a long queue,In the afternoonmanaged to buy,In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue.,packed things,添加,细节,要点,c
39、lothes, glasses, an umbrella, map.,after dinner,After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map.,see them off,添加,细节,要点,waving goodbye,felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey,The next morning, I went to the station
40、to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.,参与范文（官方）：Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weathe
41、r in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey.,
