1、Unit6. Emails and Descriptions of Places,-Writing,浙江省温州中学 蔡珍瑞,Aim :Give a vivid description of a place.,producing very clear picture in readers mind,My school is large and beautiful with wonderful scenery. You can find beautiful flowers and plants here. Sometimes it is quiet but sometimes it is live
2、ly.,1. What aspects of hutongs are introduced?2. What are the features of hutongs?,Reading,Reading,Hutongs,location,the houses in hutongs,history,features,The alleys are twisting and turning.,Some of the lanes are so narrow.,Others are wider.,Some of the lanes are so narrow that only one person can
3、pass through at a time.,Others are wider and lined with trees.,Its really easy to get lost among the twisting and turning alleys.,Features of Hutongs,The houses of rich and important people are very _ _ while poor peoples houses were_. When you are walking through the hutongs, all you can see of the
4、 houses are_walls with only a door in the front wall.,large and beautifully,decorated,smaller and plainer,high grey,Houses in Hutongs,When you walk into the gallery, you feel as if you were inside a _,_ seashell. In Metropolitan Museum of Art, you can visit an Egyptian temple, a _ Ming garden and a
5、typical room in an 18th century French. -The Best of Manhattans Art Galleries,fragile,white,fragrant,seashell,garden,Disneyland,London,Vancouver,Tibetan Mountain,London has the oldest port built by the Romans in the first century AD. At one point we were so high (in the Tibetan mountain) that we fou
6、nd ourselves cycling through clouds. It is so wet in the north of Vancouver that the trees are extremely tall, some measuring over 90 meters. The Disneyland will bring you into a magical world and make your dreams come true, whether you are traveling through space, visiting a pirate ship or meeting
7、your favorite cartoon.,How do the writers make the descriptions vivid?,London has the oldest port built by the Romans in the first century AD. At one point we were so high(in the Tibetan mountain) that we found ourselves cycling through clouds. It is so wet in the north of Vancouver that the trees a
8、re extremely tall, some measuring over 90 meters. The Disneyland will bring you into a magical world and make your dreams come true, whether you are traveling through space, visiting a pirate ship or meeting your favorite cartoon.,How do the writers add the details?,London has the oldest port built
9、by the Romans in the first century AD.,2. At one point we were so high(in the Tibetan mountain) that we found ourselves cycling through clouds.,3. It is so wet in the north of Vancouver that the trees are extremely tall, some measuring over 90 meters.,4. The Disneyland will bring you into a magical
10、world and make your dreams come true, whether you are traveling through space, visiting a pirate ship or meeting your favorite cartoon.,1. The amber room was a treasure. It was decorated with gold and jewels and it took the countrys best artists about ten years to make. It cost a great amount of mon
11、ey and took the countrys best artists a long time to make. 2. In Futuroscope, visitors can get close to parts of the world they have never experienced. You can take part in a variety of activities. You can go to the bottom of the ocean, fly through the jungle or visit the edges of the solar system.
12、3. The path up the mountain was very steep. It was very hard for us to climb. We were soon sweating and out of breath. 4. Disneyland also has many exciting rides. You can take giant swinging ships and terrifying free fall drops. You can take swinging ships and free fall drops.,Tick out the better se
13、ntence to describe the place and tell why.,1. The amber room was a treasure. It was decorated with gold and jewels and it took the countrys best artists about ten years to make.2. In Futuroscope, visitors can get close to parts of the world they have never experienced. You can go to the bottom of th
14、e ocean, fly through the jungle or visit the edges of the solar system. 3. The path up the mountain was very steep. We were soon sweating and out of breath. 4. Disneyland also has many exciting rides. You can take giant swinging ships and terrifying free fall drops.,Combine the two sentences into on
15、e.,The path up the mountain was so steep that we were soon sweating and out of breath.,In Futuroscope, visitors can get close to parts of the world they have never experienced, going to the bottom of the ocean, flying through the jungle or visiting the edges of the solar system.,The amber room was a
16、 treasure decorated with gold and jewels, which took the countrys best artists about ten years to make.,Disneyland also has many exciting rides, from giant swinging ships to terrifying free fall drops.,Writing Task,Assess and improve your writing according to the questions below:,1. Do I add details to make the descriptions vivid? 2. How do I add details to make it vivid? use specific adjectives offer figures give examples describe peoples feeling/impression 3. Do I add details through various structures?,Homework,Thank You！,
