1、Picture wrting,Duty report,Step I. Brain storming,What can you do with your smart phones?,(2) When and where do people use smart phones?,Step II. Pre-writing,Do you think its right to use smart phones in a family get-together?,Step III. Writing task,书面表达家人聚会吃饭，以前其乐融融一起天南海北地聊，现在随着智能手机的流行，出现了一种“怪现象”：一
2、桌子人一起吃饭，大家少有交谈，都围着餐桌玩起了手机。 这样的现象你身边有吗？请根据图片写一篇文章， 内容包括： 1. 简要描述图片； 2. 分析产生此现象的原因； 3. 谈谈你的看法和建议。 注意：1. 词数不少于100字；2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。,1. What information can you get from the picture?,2. How many parts should be included?,As far as I am concerned/ In my opinion, people can do the following to make the
3、 family get-together much more enjoyable. Firstly, . Secondly, . Thirdly, .,From the picture we can see a family get-together is held. However, .,The reasons accounting for the phenomenon are as follows. On the one hand, . On the other hand, .,3. Things to keep in mind while writing,(1) Coherence (2
4、) Beautiful sentences There is no doubt that On no account should we ignore the importance of The + comparative, the + comparative. It is obvious that It is time sb. did sth. Only in this way can sb. do sth. ,Step IV. Writing time (15mins),Step V. Evaluation(5mins),Step VI. Summary,What have we lear
5、ned in this class?,Step VII. Homework,1. Polish your group wrting together and then put them up on the left wall of our classroom. 2. Write your own artical down neatly and hand it in.,One possible version:,With the developement of technology, smart phones are becoming more and more popular with peo
6、ple. It is vividly shown in the picture that every one around the table focuses on playing their smart phones instead of talking to each other, leaving the grandpa sad and disappointed. There are several reasons accounting for this phenomenon. On the one hand, people may feel embarrassed due to lack
7、 of the ability to conmmunicate with each other face to face. On the other hand, the smart phones are equipped with so many interesting functions that people are easily absorbed in them.As far as Im concerned, a family get-together is a precious occasion for the whole family to have fun, on which each person is supposed to draw back from their virtual world in the smart phone to share their happiness in real life instead.,
