1、书面表达,What do you think have effects on the marks of your compositions?,1. Handwriting 2. Words and expressions3. Complicated sentences4. Structure of compositions,Marking Rules in Composition,2010高考英语高考作文评分标准（节选） 词数少于 80和多于 120的，从总分中减去2分。 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、语
2、言的连贯性及得体性。,连贯(Coherence),指文章语意的通顺和语言形式的紧密衔接并符合一定的逻辑关系。要使文章前后衔接紧密，可采用以下方法： 提示1：恰当使用关联词 如when，so，if，because，so that等。 提示2：巧妙使用与意思有联系的词或短语 如First, Second, Third, Soon, Whats more, As a result等。 提示3：适当使用过渡性语句The reasons are as follows.On the contrary,连接词的选择,1. 表示添加信息常用的连接词有, furthermore, besides, moreov
3、er, in addition, what is more, as well as, either.or., not only.but also., worse still 等。 e.g. ( NMET 湖南 ) In his opinion, we should not only know “what”, but also understand “why”.,2. 表示转折关系常用的连接词有but, yet, however,in spite of, although, on the contrary, on the other hand, otherwise等。 e.g. ( NMET 湖
4、南) Though he is 34,he looks very young for his age.It doesnt seem ugly to me; on the contrary, I think its rather beautiful.,3. 表示因果关系常用的连接词有so, therefore, as a result, due to, thanks to, therefore, since等。 e.g. (NMET 福建) As we all know, you are what you eat. Therefore, it is very important for us t
5、o form healthy eating habits.,4. 表示条件关系常用的连接词有as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless 等。 e.g. (NMET 天津) If something terrible should happen, it would be difficult for people to get out quickly.,5. 表示时间顺序关系常用的连接词有afterwards, after a while, immediately, as soon as, from now on, meanwhile, not.
6、until 等。 e.g.( NMET 浙江) They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile , the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.,Task 1 请在下列句子的空格中填上恰当的关联词或与意思有联系的短语。,1. Xiao Ming was walking in the street_he heard someone cry for help. 2. He advised that
7、I hire a car _ I could travel around in the west . 3. _ he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl. 4. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _,we can pay a visit to some places of interest. 5. I shared the cost of the gas with my friends . _, I saved $80.,when,so that/ i
8、n order that,As soon as /Immediately,Whatsmore/Besides,As a result/Therefore,1. 定语从句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place where we can find much useful information 2. 强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. 3. 倒装句 e.g. 1) Only in this way can you solve this problem.2)
9、 Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.,句式的运用,4. 省略句 和 非谓语 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. 5. with复合结构 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand. 6.名词性从句 e.g. Thats what I should do. 7. 状语从句 e.g. Time passed quickly befo
10、re we knew it.,Task 2 按要求改写下列句子,使其合二为一。1.The man is Mr. Wang. He came to our school yesterday（定语从句）The man who came to our school yesterday is Mr. Wang.2. The driver escaped; he left the old man lying on the road.(非谓语）The driver escaped, leaving the old man lying on the road.3 The meal was over. We
11、all went home.(with 复合结构）With the meal over, we all went home.4.John likes studying ;he also likes playing.（否定倒装）Not only does John like studying, but also he likes playing.,Task 3 Writing Practice 请你给中国日报写一篇稿件，谈谈农村儿童失学的主要原因及你的看法。 原因： 1、 家庭贫穷，供不起儿童上学，他们不得不在家赚钱养家。 2、部分家长认为女孩上学无用，不愿让她们上学。 3、 部分儿童对功课不感
12、兴趣，不愿上学。 看法： 1、 每个儿童包括女孩都应有受教育的机会。 2、全社会都应重视儿童教育，他们对国家的未来将起到重要的作用。 要求： 1、不要逐字逐句翻译。 2、语句要连贯通顺。 3、字数100个左右。,Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. Most families are poor and cant afford their education. They have to stay at home and make money. Some parents think daughters ne
13、ednt go to school. They dont let them go to school. Some children are not interested in their studies and wouldnt like to go to school.,诊断：优点 1、词能达意；2、语句表达基本正确。缺点 语句不够连贯。药方 1、使用常见句型；2、每两个句子之间使用关联词或过度词。,Now in the country areas, there are many children out of school. _. _, most families are too poor
14、to send their children to school . _, they have no choice but to stay at home and make money. _, some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school. _, they dont let them go to school. _, some children are not interested in their studies. _, some wouldnt like to go to school.,Th
15、e reasons are as follows There are many reasons for this,First,As a result,Second,Therefore,Third,Whats worse/Worse still,Task 4 Writing by yourselves,Storytelling从前有座山，山上有个庙，庙里有一位老和 尚和一位小和尚，老和尚在和小和尚讲故事 Reference answer Once upon a time, there was a hill, on the top of which stood a temple where lived two monks, and the old monk was telling a story to the little one,Thank youBye-bye,
