1、高考英语作文复习课,影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素1.语篇信息是否完整 2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。 3.是否使用高级词汇 4.是否使用复杂句 5 .卷面整洁,书写工整,08年浙江省高考英语书面表达评分标准,写作基本步骤： 仔细审题，把握要点。 围绕要点，写出句子。 添加过度，确保连贯。 先求正确，再求灵活。 认真眷写，卷面整洁。,检查,1.时态 2. 主谓一致 3.名词单复数 4.单词拼写 5.动词的过去式, 过去分词 6.句子是否完整,高考作文类型：,A.看图说话类文章 B.活动类文章 C.夹叙夹议类文章 D.地理方位类文章 E.图表 分析类文章 F.议论文写作 G.书信、E-
2、mail 、通知、便条类文章,A.看图说话类文章,基本模式 描写画面：概括内容+具体描绘+归纳主题/感想 说明画面：概括内容+按顺序说明具体内容+归纳主题/感想 议论画面： 观后感：简述内容+概括议论，提出观点+联系实际证明观点+归纳总结/感想 评论：简述内容+提出观点+分点评析+归纳总结/ 感想,B. 活动类文章,基本特点 条理清楚,遵循一定的顺序（顺序，倒序或插叙） 将5Wh交代清楚,who, what, when,where,why 语言简洁、明了、准确 语态、时态、人称 方式 个人活动-事件的起因、发展、结果和个人的感想 集体活动-活动的全过程（集合、出发、到达、具体活动、返回）及参加
3、活动的感受 常用关联词,基本框架,一.概括事件起因 On May 1, we went to to do 二.客观详述经过 First, we ,then we At the same time we And finally we 三.事件的结果及感想 Though we, we,假设你是李华，在美国探亲，2000年2月8日清晨，你目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告。,One possible version: It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8,2000. I was walking along Pa
4、rk Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didnt stop but drove
5、off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the car number was AC864. About two minutes later ,I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua,C.夹叙夹议类文章,故事描述夹议论,下面四幅图是一位看车师傅向你讲述他的一次遭遇偷车贼的经历。请你简述事情的经过，并简单发表你的看法。词数不少于60. 参考词汇：赔偿compensation
6、看车师傅parking attendant,下面四幅图是一位看车师傅向你讲述他的一次遭遇偷车贼的经历。请你简述事情的经过，并简单发表你的看法。词数不少于60。,Possible VersionIn front of a shop, there was a long line of bicycle. The parking attendant was busy receiving and seeing his customers off when a thief got a chance to steal a bicycle. The thief unlocked the bicycle,got
7、 on it and rode away. Seeing that，the attendant shouted to passers-by for help. But unfortunately nobody reacted. Disappointed and helpless， the attendant watched the thief disappear. Of course he had to pay the owner of the stolen bicycle 400 yuan as compensation.In my opinion，the passers-by should
8、 be to blame， for they could have helped the attendant. As members of society， everyone should do something to keep public safety.,假设你是图1中的男孩。请根据以下图画提供的情节线索，以Sharing Housework为题，用英文叙述你帮妈妈做家务的经过及感想。,Sharing housework,one Sunday afternoon, I was going to play football with some of my classmates on our
9、 school playground. But when I saw that Mother was washing clothes and seemed to have got some pain on her back, I changed my mind. I thought it was difficult for her to wash so many clothes. So when she was going away to get water with a bucket, I took over the washing. When my classmate Xiaoming c
10、ame to ask me to play football, I refused. I did my best to do the washing well. When Mother came back, she was surprised to see all the clothes hanging on the line. She was pleased that I could help with some housework and praised me. I felt very happy. I think it is good for children to share hous
11、ework with their parents.,现象描述夹议论,下面4幅图画从4 个方面反映了北京市公共场所所存在的不良现象。请你简单描述4幅图画，对其中某一社会现象陈述你的看法，并简单说明理由。词数不少于60.,As the society develops, more and more attention has been called to appropriate manners. However, there are still some inappropriate behaviours. For example, some bicyclists run the red traff
12、ic lights. Some other people throw litter in public places. In the cinema, its not unusual to hear people talking loudly on mobile phones in front of others. Very often, we can see scrabbles in scenic spots.Im strongly against talking loudly in the cinema, for this behaviour shows disrespect to othe
13、rs. Besides, it disturbs the audience around and make others feel very annoyed.,根据以下四幅图,撰写一篇短文,呼吁人们爱护森林,保护我们赖以生存的环境。,Our earth used to be a beautiful place. Thick forest and green grass covered the hills, which were the best home for birds and animals. As time went on, people destroyed the forests t
14、o grow crops. What was worse, people let their cattle eat up the grass. So you can see a stretch of wasteland instead of green hills now. As a result, when it rains, the soil is washed down the hills, and strong winds blow away the rich soil that lies on the top of the fields. We do hope all the peo
15、ple will take good care of our forests and plant more trees to improve our living environment.,请仔细观察下面的漫画。其中妇女和男孩是母子关系,小女孩同他们素不相识。请用英语将这幅漫画改编成一个小故事.利用one day, another day 构成故事的两个段落，最后简要阐明自己的观点,One day, a little girl fell down on the ground. A boy went over and wanted to help her up, but his mother s
16、topped him and said, “ Dont do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.”Another day, the mother was surprised to see that her son just let the fallen oil bottle be. And he said to his mother,“ If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.”I disa
17、gree with the mother on how to teach the children. I think that parents should bet their children know it is a pleasure to help people who are in trouble. We live in society, which is a big family for all of us. We should care for each other and help each other.,某英语报社开展以“Parents and Children为题的“看图作文
18、”征文活动，要求根据以下三幅图用英语写一篇作文，文章内容应包括：4月9日发生在李华家的事情；你个人的感受。请你写一篇向报社投稿的征文。,Parents and ChildrenOn the evening of April 9th, Lihua was watching TV while his mother was busy preparing for dinner in the kitchen. How attentive he was watching the TV program when the telephone rang. It was from a friend of his
19、mothers, who wanted to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY to his mother. “Today is my mothers birthday?“ Lihua was a little puzzled. “How come that I have forgotten all about it?“ Lihua thought to himself, feeling ashamed.At the story, I got deeply shocked. It is not easy for parents to bring us up. They give us lo
20、ts of love and care, while we dont care for them enough. Now its never too late to realize this and show our love and care for them.,D 地理方位写作,写作框架 写作目的 方位描述 简短收尾,方位名词：,在中间 在前面/在前部 在后面 在左/右边 在对面 在顶部 在底部 在旁边 在周围 在东/南/西/北 以东,倒装句,1.山顶上矗立着一座30米高的塔。2.街道后有一条小河3.村子南面有几百英里宽的草地。,词组&短语,1.位于 2.经过 3.向前走，你就会看到 4.
21、穿过主楼 5.继续往前走，直到,假定你是李华。应英国朋友Bob的要求，写一封短信介绍你校图书馆的基本情况。内容须包括下面两幅图中的相关信息。,词数100左右,Dear Bob :Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library is _ .There is _ .The library is big .When you get inside ,you will see _ .There are also lots of _ .We can _ .According to the rule ,_ and _.
22、It is open _ _ and closed _ . We all like our library very much .Best wishes , Li Hua,Dear Bob :Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library is in the center of the school .There is a beautiful garden in front it and our classroom building is right behind it .The library is b
23、ig .When you get inside ,you will see many shelves full of books on different subjects .There are also lots of newspapers and magazines .We borrow books and do some reading in the library .According to the rule ,every student can borrow up to 5books each time and keep them for 10 days .It is open fr
24、om 9 am to 7 pm from Monday to Friday and closed on weekends . We all like our library very much .Best wishes , Li Hua,假设你叫李明，你的朋友王方要到你家参加你的生日聚会。他没到过你家，不知道如何走。他家住在城北的农村，有一路公共汽车经他家到城里。你住在城里红星路（Red Star Street）幸福巷（Xingfu Lane）23 号楼405室。现在请你根据示意草图，用英语写封信告诉王方怎么到你家。写信时间：2005年4月24日。词数100左右。,April 24,2005
25、Dear Wang Fang, Im glad that you can come to my birthday party. Now Im writing to tell you _. You may _ and then _ _. _ and _ at the first crossing. _ about eighty meters, and youll see _ _. Next to it is _. On its left there are _. I live in Room 405 in No.23 building, which _. Im sure _. Im lookin
26、g forward to meeting you. Yours,Li Ming,April 24,2005 Dear Wang Fang, Im glad that you can come to my birthday party. Now Im writing to tell you how you can come to my house. You may take a No.1 bus and then get off at the Hoping Road Stop. Go forward and turn left at the first crossing. Walk along
27、the Red Star Street about eighty meters, and youll see the Red Star Hotel on your right. Next to it is the Xingfu Lane. On its left there are many buildings. I live in Room 405 in No.23 building, which is the third from the north. Im sure you will find it without difficulty. Im looking forward to me
28、eting you. Yours,Li Ming,假如你是林丹，随中学生访问团正在德国参观访问，住在朋友Karen的家里，不久你们将回国。请你给当地的国际航空公司售票处发E-mail，预订回国机票，说明以下要点：1、订3月11日上午10：30从法兰克福(Frankfurt)飞往中国上海的2等舱机票20张。 2、希望三天内将机票送到你的住处（按所给的简图写明在科学宫下车步行去Karen家的路线）。 3、需要时及时通过e-mail或电话与你联系（你的电话号码是：825-653227）。 注意：1、开头和结尾已写好（不计入词数）。 2、词数100左右。,Dear Sir/Madam,A group
29、of Chinese middle school students are visiting here, and were going back home soon,2,3,1,Dear Sir/Madam,A group of Chinese middle school students are visiting here, and were going back home soon Please book for me twenty second-class tickets in the plane leaving from Frankfurt for Shanghai, China at
30、 10:30 on the morning of March 11th Im staying at Karens house Would you please send me the tickets in three days?Karens house is not far from the Science Palace When you get off at the palace, walk down the street until you come to a crossing Take a right turn there Keep on walking until another cr
31、ossing, and you will see a post office at the corner on your left Karens house is next to it Please send me an e-mail or call me if necessary My phone number is 825-653227 Many thanksLin Dan,E.图表 分析类文章,曲线图形式 柱状图形式 饼状图形式 时态一般用一般现在时。,写作指导,第一步，理解并概括整体信息读懂图表标题，包括副标题所提供的信息。准确了解主题内容后，观察趋向和结果，找出变化的规律。然后，用一
32、两句话就图表所反映的主题、事物发展的趋向和结果以及所反映出的深层问题等方面作出概括性的评论。 第二步，描述具体信息从不同的角度对图表列出的数据进行描述。在说明数据的变化时，既要说明结果，也要表明趋势。对于趋势的描述，至少需引用一组数据变化的例子，有时还需要再举出一组数据与之作比较。顺着这样的思路写下来，文章将会内容丰富，脉络清晰。 第三步，表达个人观点层次1：对图表的含义进行分析、引申与议论层次2：给出结论，写出自己的观点等,三个步骤,第一段，说明图表 第二段，主题句图表说明1图表说明2图表说明3 如， As the bar chart shows, _ during the years of
33、 _ to _. 第三段，说明引起变化的原因 主题句原因1原因2原因3 如，Several factors contribute to _. _. (原因1) And _.(原因2) Furthermore, _ (原因3) All these result in _. 第四段，说明影响或者提出解决办法 第五段，主题句+建议+前景预测,典型单词&短语,增长 go up; jump; increase; rise 下降 fall; go down; decrease; drop 在此期间 during this time/ the period 除了以外 apart from 与相比 compa
34、red with/to 如上图所示 from the above table/chart,典型句式,1.点题总结句式 We can see from the graph that From the table we can find out that As can be seen from the chart, As is shown in the chart, the production last month rose Chart 1 shows that,The number was/ is ten times as many as in 1995. It doubled the num
35、ber of last year. There is an increase of 20% this year. It decreased twice than that of the year 1996. The total number was lowered by 10%. It rose from 10% to 15% if the total this year. Compared with 1997, it fell from 15% to 10%.,2.细节描写句式,模板 一,As is shown by the figure/percentage in the table/pi
36、cture, _ has been on rise/ decrease, significantly/dramatically rising/decreasing from _ in _ to _ in _. From the sharp rise/decline in the chart, it goes without saying that _. There are at least two good reasons accounting for _.On one hand, _.On the other hand, _ is due to the fact that _.In addi
37、tion, _ is responsible for _. Maybe there are some other reasons to show _.But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that _. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.,你是某校高二学生，今年寒假当上某英文报特约小记者。
38、你就下面几项内容对一百个城市家庭进行了生活现状的问卷调查。请你给该报写一篇题为“People are enjoying a richer life ”的英语稿，报道调查结果，并适当分析其中一个数据所反映的情况。词数不少于60。,People are enjoying a richer life As we can see from the chart, peoples life has changed greatly in these five years. Five years ago, only 13 percent of the families had private cars, bu
39、t now the number has gone up to 38 percent. In 1999, only 16 percent of the families could afford to buy houses, while now 35 percent of them have their own flats. Now more and more people want to broaden their horizon by going abroad for further education. The number has changed from 11percent in 1
40、999 to 28 percent. Compared with the number 5 years ago, which was only 20 percent, now more than 50 percent of the families prefer to spend their holiday travelling. From the large number that people choose to study abroad, we can see that people care more about education. They what to improve the
41、quality of their life by learning more.,某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。词数不少于60个。,Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. The students put the most time -93 minutes -into doing their
42、 homework, and next in line is watching TV, which takes up 46 minutes. They put in about the same amount of time in listening to music and working on the computers, 34 minutes and 30 minutes each. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework. As is shown in Chart 2, only
43、10% of the time is taken up with sports activities. I think the school should encourage the students to do more exercise after class. In this way, they may be healthier and more energetic.,某对外发行的英文报纸对中国群众体育现状进行了调查，请根据下列图表和所给提示，用英语写一篇报道， 参加体育活动的人口比例：,参加体育活动的人口比例：,影响人们参加体育活动的客观原因:,针对以上状况作出说明:1. 缺乏体育锻炼
44、会使人们的体质下降;2. 应充分认识体育锻炼的重要性;3. 应采取措施,提供人们锻炼的场地和器材(facilities);,（a）不懂锻炼方法 （b）场地远、不方便 （c）缺少场地设施 （d）缺少时间,Recently we made a survey of the people on physical training. ,Recently we made a survey about physical training. Only 35 percent of the surveyed people have taken part in physical activities, but th
45、e rest never have. There are many reasons for this.Over half of the people say they havent got enough time to do exercise. 34.9% of them complain that they dont have places where they can relax and that there are not enough training facilities. 12.9% of the people feel that they live too far away fr
46、om the training centers. Some of them even dont know how to train.Because of lack of physical training, many people are not in good health. People should realize the importance of it, and measures should be taken to provide people with more training facilities and places.,观察下列图表，请以“Changes in the Ow
47、nership of House” 为题，为校报写一篇短文。1、根据图示描述该市住房产权的变化2、分析产生这些变化的原因 3、说明这些变化对个人和社会产生的影响,1995 2000 2005 (75:25) (60:40) (20:80),As can be seen from the chart, ownership of houses in a big city in China changed in the past ten years. As can be seen from the chart, ownership of houses in a big city in China c
48、hanged in the past ten years. In 1995, 75 percent of the houses were state-owned. Five years later, the rate of state-owned houses to private ones was 3 to 2. But from then on, the ownership of houses changed rapidly and so far 80 percent of houses have been private.What caused the changes? There mi
49、ght have been two main reasons. First, from 1995 up to now, the peoples living standards have been improving. Most of them can afford to buy the houses. Second, most people do not save a lot of money in the bank for their children as their ideas of parents did in the past. They want to have their own home and enjoy life.Such changes have had a great effect on the development of society. It does good to both the citizens and the government.,
