1、高考应试作文 写作训练,正反观点对比,越来越多的人拥有微博（ micro-blog），下表反映了人们对微博的不同看法假如你是李华，请你根据以上表格的内容提示，给某英语报社写一篇100词左右的英语短文，并发表自己的看法。 注意： 1所写短文需包括已提供的所有信息； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,书写注意事项,3、一旦写错，规范修改用一条斜线划掉即可。 eg:,He can speker English very well.,He can speker speak English very well.,Talk about it in your group.,1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正
2、确。 作文答题纸一般为单线，我们应将单线作为“四线格”中的第三线并以此为基准书写，不要把它作为第四线，让字母吊在线上。,2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或用修正液覆盖现象给人一种凌乱的感觉。,Game,英文字母示例,单从书写上看 猜一猜他们的作文会是得多少分？,中考各档书面表达示例,21,4分,10,5,Bad sample,卷面不整洁; 涂改较多;语言错误多;层次不清;得11分,字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。,对比鲜明,Remember：,We must pay attention to our handwriting,it can help us get a high gra
3、de.,A常见题型：talk in your group1、根据汉语提示完成作文。2、根据表格提示完成作文。3、根据图片提示完成作文。要求：写一篇100字左右的英语作文。,书面表达常见题型及写作技巧,B写作策略:please,remember,审 列 润(整,连,美) 草稿纸,抄 试卷,写作基本要求,1.字数达到要求。（100字左右）2.卷面整洁，字迹清楚。3.语法正确。 4.标点正确。 5.文章内容是否切题 。6.格式正确。,高考书面表达评分标准,第五档（很好）（2125分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 覆盖所有内容要点。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力
4、使用较 复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。,高考书面表达评分标准,How to polish your Writing,本文属于_，基本时态是_，人称用_,议论文,一般现在时,第一和第三人称,审题,抓要点，列提纲-文章结构,正反观点对比类的文章,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,构思-文章结构,With the rapid development of the Internet, it is common to see many people set up their own micro-blogs
5、. 对微博有两种态度. (2) 态度一: .一部分人认为它好，原因（1）原因（2） (3)态度二: 另一部分人认为它不好，原因（1） 原因（2）， (4)我的观点: 好or不好 ？,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,表示不同观点的套语,Paragraph1 总起:Different people hold/ have different opinions.People have taken different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem.There are two opposite opi
6、nions about it.,paragrap 2表达赞同观点of them are in favor of the idea thatPeople who are for the idea think Some people believe that ,表达反对的观点:On the contrary, of them hold a different view. of them hold the opposite opinion. However, each coin has two sides. On the other hand, people that .,object,(4)你的观
7、点: ,in my view / opinion, I agree with, As for me, As far as Im concerned,总结： in brief, in a word, in summary,How to polish(完善) your Writing,构思-短语,观点一 1展示才华、分享经验；2认识朋友、增加知识,show their talent ; share experience meet new friends ; gain knowledge,观点二 1花费很多时间和精力2影响工作和休息。,it takes both time and energy to
8、 do sth ; affect our work and rest,高考大纲中常用的衔接词,what is more (而且); in addition(此外)；besides, moreover(而且，此外),however; on the contrary(正相反),Therefore(因此，所以); as a result; because,like; unlike, on the other hand,to sum up ; all in all,1. 表示递进,2. 表示转折,How to polish your Writing,3. 表示因果,4. 表示对比,5. 表示总结,:,
9、Some people think it is _ show their talent and share information.(赞同)_, （与之相反）Others _.(持有不同/相反的观点),小试牛刀：衔接词,However,hold a different view,hold the opposite opinion,a good way to,On the contrary,More and more people have their own micro-blogs. Some people think it is good, because they can show the
10、ir talent and share information. It is convenient to them. They can also meet new friends and gain knowledge. However, different people hold different views. Others think it is bad. They spend a lot of time and energy on it. So it will affect our work and rest. I think the micro-blog is very good, b
11、ecause we can communicate with our friends.,(1)More and more people have their own micro-blogs.,句式-化腐朽为神奇,With the rapid development of the Internet, it is common to see that many people set up their own micro-blogs.,句式(1): It is + adj /n+(for sb). to do 句式(2): 宾语从句,句式-化腐朽为神奇,(2) Some people think i
12、t is good, because they can show their talent and share information. It is convenient to them.,Some people think it is a good way to show their talent and share a good amount of information and experience. Meanwhile, its convenient to keep in touch with friends.,(3)They can also meet new friends and
13、 gain knowledge.,It is also a new platform to meet new friends and gain knowledge of the outside world.,句式-化腐朽为神奇,(4)Others think it is bad.,However, others have opposite opinions.,注意：使用高级词汇,They argue that it takes both time and energy to write new or read micro-blogs, which will affect our work an
14、d rest.,(5)They spend a lot of time and energy on it. So it will affect our work and rest.,句式-化腐朽为神奇,非限定语从句,名词性从句,(6) I think the micro-blog is very good, because we can communicate with our friends.,In my view, the micro-blog is a good tool for us to keep our eyes open and communicate with others.
15、It will benefit us a lot if we can limit the time we spend on it to avoid getting addicted.,broaden our horizons,句式-化腐朽为神奇,Dear sir,recently our classmates With the rapid development of the Internet, it is common to see many people set up their own micro-blogs. Some people think it is a good way to
16、show their talent and share information. Meanwhile, its convenient to keep in touch with friends. It is also a new platform to meet new friends and gain knowledge of the outside world.However, others have opposite opinions. They argue that it takes both time and energy to write new or read micro-blo
17、gs, which will affect our work and rest.In my view, the micro-blog is a good tool for us to broaden our horizons and communicate with others. It will benefit us a lot if we can limit the time we spend on it to avoid getting addicted.,词汇层面,1.越晚学到的词汇，越有水平。 2.越往后想到的词汇，用的人就越少，自然就越有水平。人靠衣装，文靠词装词汇的选择灵活新颖，
18、出奇制胜。,使用较高级的词汇,读书对心灵有益。,Reading does good to our mind Reading is beneficial to our mind. Readingis of great benefit to our mind.,Reading is good for our mind.,(1) Students can enrich their knowledge (2) Stuents can have a good command of their knowledge,Students can learn their knowledge.,Homework,仿写文,How to polish your Writing,2019/1/4,假如你是高三的学生，最近你就高三模拟考试该难还是该容易这个问题进行了一次调查。请结合下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的看法。 30%赞成偏难，反对偏易 1喜欢挑战，越难越好； 2有助于学生了解自己的薄弱环节，改进学习方法。 反方观点 70%赞成偏易，反对偏难 1题目太难，学生会泄气，会害怕今后的高考； 2题目容易，易获高分，有自信。 注意：1词数120左右，开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)； 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,
