1、 写作练兵(2015 乐山)近几年，越来越多的中国人出国旅游，他们中的一些不文明行为引起了人们的极大关注。调查显示，中国游客位列世界第二不受欢迎的人。为此，请你根据以下要点，给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，并提出你的建议，呼吁人们文明出行。1. 不高声喧哗；2. 排队候车或就餐；3. 不随地吐痰或乱扔垃圾；4. 不乱涂乱画。注意：1. 词数：80 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2. 应覆盖所有要点，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；3. 参考词汇：spit v . 吐痰；behavior n. 行为。With more and more Chinese people traveling abroad,
2、 their bad behaviors have become a hot topic. A recent US survey showed Chinese were the second worst tourists. How can we be a good tourist? Here are some tips for you._【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取以下信息：1. 本文就“文明出行” 这一话题发表看法，属于议论文；2. 写作内容要包括：对不文明现象的描写、提出呼吁、给出行为建议等，应涵盖给出的所有要点；3. 文章是写社会现象，要用一般现在时态；4. 文章在表述作者观点时
3、用第一人称，描写社会现象时用第三人称；5. 80 词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。【写作指导】文明出行要点提示 素材串联开头：点明主题 中国人出境旅游中的不文明现象引起社会极大关注(travel abroad)正文：给出建议1. 不高声喧哗(keep voice down)2. 排队候车或就餐(wait in line for, take a bus, have dinner )3. 不随地吐痰或乱扔垃圾(drop litter)4. 不乱涂乱画(write or draw pictures)结尾：呼吁 1. 尊重当地文化(respect local customs)2. 保护环境(take
4、 care of the environment)【高分范文】 With more and more Chinese people traveling abroad, their bad behaviors have become a hot topic. A recent US survey showed Chinese were the second worst tourists. How can we be a good tourist? Here are some tips for you. First, we should keep our voice down while talk
5、ing with friends in public. Please wait in line if we want to take a bus or have dinner. Also, dont spit or drop litter whenever we want. Finally, its really a bad behavior to write or draw pictures on famous buildings.As a middle school student, I think we should pay attention to our behavior, sayi
6、ng no to those bad habits. While enjoying ourselves, we should not only respect local customs, but also take care of the environment.话题 4 咨询建议(2015 威海改编)对 学 弟 学 妹 们 的 建 议初中三年的学习生活将要结束了， 想必你有很多话想对你的学弟学妹们说。假如你是张扬， 请你给学校英语广播站写一封致学弟学妹们的公开信。内容可以结合你在学习时间、方法， 师生相处， 遵规守纪， 学习与兴趣爱好关系的处理等方面的经验， 给他们提出合理的建议， 并祝福
7、他们。要求： 1. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 80 词左右。_【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，提取信息：1. 要求写一封公开信，因此文章为应用文，内容可以包括在学习时间、方法，师生相处，遵规守纪，学习与兴趣爱好关系的处理等方面的经验，可以就某一方面或几方面内容描述，不必面面俱到；2. 根据自己的经验，提出合理的建议，并要有祝福语；3. 本文是介绍自己在学校生活的经验，写作时用第一人称；4. 本文描述学习生活的注意事项，通常用一般现在时；5. 词数： 80 词左右，不得出现真实的姓名、校名。 【写作指导】一封致同学们的公开信要点提示 素材串联开头：礼
8、貌用语并引出话题毕业在即，想分享学校生活的经验(graduate from, at the moment, would like to share, experience ) 正文：具体介绍经验及建议1. 遵规守纪：校规使学校保持良好秩序(lots of rules, keep . in good order)2. 师生相处：良好的师生关系能提高学习，有必要和别人相处好(good relationship, improve, its necessary, get on well with)3. 不要浪费时间(waste time)4. 先学习，后做喜欢的事情(study comes first
9、，then.)结尾：送上祝福语1. 希望有所帮助(be helpful to)2. 祝你成功(wish you success)【高分范文】 Dear schoolmates，How time flies! Im graduating from our school. At the moment, I would like to share my experience of school life with you.Firstly, our school has a lot of rules so that they can keep our school life in good order
10、. Next，a good relationship with teachers and students can help you improve your study. So its necessary for you to get on well with teachers and classmates. Thirdly, every minute counts. Try not to waste time, because we cant call yesterday back. Finally, everyone has hobbies. But I think study must come first, then we can do what we are interested in.I hope it can be helpful to you. Wish you success.Yours truly，Zhang Yang
