1、 2018 年 12 月 4 日考点 短文改错（2）高考频度： 难易程度：(2018新课标全国卷 II) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（） ，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。When I was little, Fridays night was our family
2、 game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to pl
3、ay the games for them sometimes. I didnt realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.【参考答案】When I was little, night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of
4、all in the sitting room. As kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to them, my parents would not let me. They would say to that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games them sometimes. I didnt realize how right my parents until I enter
5、ed high school. The games my parents taught me I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章讲述了作者的个人经历。小时候周五夜晚家长不允许作者看卡通片，而是让他和他们一块儿玩扑克牌游戏。长大后作者才明白，这些纸牌游戏在后来的生活中很有用。第二处：考查名词单复数。all 表示三者或三者以上，后用名词复数。故把 sort 改为 sorts。第三处：考查冠词。这里表示“作为一个孩子”，a 用在表示泛指的单数名词前，the 表示特指。故把 the 改为
6、a。第四处：考查动词不定式。句意：无论我要求多少次要去看（卡通片） 。用不定式表示目的。故把 watching 改为 watch。第五处：考查情态动词。would 后跟动词原形，故把 to 删除。第六处：考查代词。句意：他们会对我说玩纸牌有助于大脑。偷换人称代词，是对“我” 说，前面提到的 I，而不是 we。故把 us 改为 me。第七处：考查固定搭配。be unwilling to do sth.意为“ 不愿意做某事，不情愿做某事”。本文介绍的是过去的情况，故用过去时。所以在 unwilling 前加 was。第八处：考查介词。play the games with sb.表示“和某人一块玩
7、游戏 ”，故把 for 改为 with。第九处：考查时态。根据上下文语境可知此处要用一般过去时。故把 are 改为 were。第十处：考查宾语从句的连接词。句意：当我是个孩子的时候我父母教给我的纸牌游戏在我日后的生活中证明非常有用。宾语从句连接词并不是表示地点状语，而是时间状语。故把 where 改为 when。【应试必备】短文改错题九大考点分析高考短文改错题具有高起点、低落点的特点，对学生的语言感觉和语言能力要求较高，但改正的错误往往比较简单。很多学生做不好改错题不是因为没有掌握这些语法知识，而是不能通过语感找出错误。所以培养学生有意识地去注意一些高考短文改错的常考点非常重要。综合近年的高考
8、题我们可以看出主要在以下语法项目上设题：1.名词和限制词的搭配主要涉及可数与不可数名词与冠词、指示代词、物主代词的错误搭配，以及名词的单复数的误用。2.动词的时态、语态以及非谓语动词常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时中间杂有另一时态的现象，以及动词的谓语与非谓语形式、非谓语动词之间的误用。3.代词的误用主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词，单数用了复数代词或相反；应当用形容词性的物主代词用了名词性等。4.数词的误用主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用，以及 hundred, thousand, dozen, score 等词和具体数量词连用时的用法以及表示约数的用法。5.形容词与副词主要涉及到
9、形容词和副词的原级、比较级与最高级的误用，以及形容词和副词的误用等。6.考查英语中的并列现象在一些英语中的并列结构中没有用并列的语法结构，如并列连词连接的两个部分等。7.考查上下文的逻辑关系but, and, so， however, otherwise等一些并列连词和连接副词的误用。before, after, when, until,since等状语从句引导词的误用等。还有肯定和否定的误用等。8.一些相似结构的误用如 used to do, be used to do, be used to doing 等结构的误用。9.惯用法的搭配。My uncle is the owner of a
10、restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high qua
11、lity oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.【参考答案】My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to I live. Though not very big, the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always cro
12、wded with customers at meal times. Some people even to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is . Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables high quality oil are for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in short period of time. Instead, he hopes that bus
13、iness will grow .【答案解析】第四处：honesthonesty。考查名词。根据语境我叔叔告诉我他成功的关键在于诚实可知，此处该用名词形式作表语。第五处：orand。考查并列连词。根据语境可知，此处不是表示选择关系，而是表示新鲜的蔬菜和优质的油，故把 or 改为 and。第六处：usingused。考查被动语态。fresh vegetables 和 high quality oil 与 use 之间存在被动关系，故用被动语态。第七处：becoming 前加 of。考查介词。 dream of doing sth.是固定搭配，意为梦想做某事。第八处：thea。考查冠词。此处表示泛指，故该用不定冠词 a，in a short period of time 意为短期内。第九处：o ur his。 考 查 代 词 。 由 语 境 及 主 语 he 可 知 ， 此 处 指 的 是 叔 叔 的 生 意 ， 故 将our 改 为 his 才 合 乎 语 境 。第十处：steadysteadily。考查副词。修饰动词 grow 该用副词，所以应用 steady 的副词形式 steadily。进步，在于总结。我在这，总结在哪儿？_
