1、HOW TO WRITE STEP BY STEP?,Why writing is so difficult for you?,Reason 1. dont know what to write. 写什么,Reason 2. dont know how to write it . 怎么写,书面表达： 假设你是李华，你校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。请你给目前在本市就读的你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起参加。内容包括：介绍比赛的相关内容； 说明你打算参加的原因； 询问对方的意向。 （注意：词数100左右。）,Step 1 发散思维，扩充内容 （enrich contents）
2、,1.介绍比赛的相关内容,我校拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。,我校，茂名市第17中学，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。,我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。,为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。,很高兴告诉你，为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。,2 说明你打算参加的原因,原因,1.喜欢学习英语,2. 想提高口语能力,3.希望结交有共同兴趣爱好的朋友,对西方国家的文化感兴趣。,口语在语言学习中扮演重要角色。,共同学习，共同进步。,3.
3、询问对方的意见,你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期待你的回复。,我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期待你的回复。,Step 2 翻译句子，有所舍弃(translate),很高兴告诉你，为了提高我们学习英语的兴趣，我校，全市最漂亮最好的学校，拟定于下周五举行一次英语幽默故事大赛。,表达1 同位语 I am delighted to tell you that in order to increase our interest of learning English, my school, the best and
4、the most beautiful in the city, plans to hold an English humorous story competition next Friday.,同位语,表达2 定语从句I am delighted to tell you that in order to increase our interest of learning English, my school, which is the best and the most beautiful in the city, plans to hold an English humorous story
5、 competition next Friday.,定语从句,表达3 被动语态I am delighted to tell you that in order to increase our interest of learning English, an English humorous story competition will be held next Friday in my school, which is the best and the most beautiful school in the city.,一般将来时的被动语态,Reason 1：,我想参加这个比赛是因为我喜欢英
6、语，对西方文化感兴趣。,表达1：直接翻译 I want to take part in the competition because I like English ,I am interested in western culture.,表达2：定/宾语从句 The reason why the competition attracts my attention is that I like English and am interested in western culture.,表达3：升级词汇The reason why the competition attracts my atte
7、ntion is that I am fond of English and crazy about western culture.,直译,定、宾语从句,升级词汇,Reason 2：,想提高口语能力，因为口语在语言学习中扮演重要角色。,表达1：直译The second reason is that I want to improve my oral (spoken) English, because it plays an important role in language learning.,表达2：定语从句 As we all know, oral (spoken) English p
8、lays an important role in language learning, so I want to improve my oral (spoken) English .,表达3：升级表达，As we all know, oral (spoken) English plays an important role in language learning, so I long to improve my oral (spoken) English by making use of this competition.,直译,定语从句,升级表达,Reason 3：,希望结交有共同兴趣爱
9、好的朋友，共同学习，共同进步。,表达1 直译I wish to make friends based on common interest and want to learn together , progress together.,表达2 定语从句I wish to make friends with those who has common interest with me and then learn together , progress together.,表达3 升级表达 I wish to make friends with those whose has common int
10、erest with me so that we can learn together and progress at the same time.,升级表达,定语从句,直译,询问对方意见：我知道你很幽默，并且擅长讲故事，所以想了解你你是否有意愿参加？若有，我将给你提供更多的细节信息。期待你的回复。,表达1. I know you are humorous and good at telling stories so I want to know whether you are interested in the competition or not. If your answer is ye
11、s, I will offer you more detailed information. I am looking forward for your reply.,表达2. Your humor sense and talent of telling stories impressed me so deeply that I strongly recommend you to take part in the competition. If your answer is positive, more detailed information will be offered. I am lo
12、oking forward for your reply.,直译,升级表达,Step 3 连句成篇,I am delighted to tell you that in order to increase our interest of learning English, an English humorous story competition will be held next Friday in my school, which is the best and the most beautiful in the city. The reason why the competition a
13、ttracts my attention is that I am fond of English and crazy about western culture. As we all know, oral (spoken) English plays an important role in language learning, so I long to improve my oral (spoken) English by making use of this competition. I wish to make friends with those whose has common i
14、nterest with me so that we can learn together and progress at the same time. Your humor sense and talent of telling stories impressed me so deeply that I strongly recommend you to take part in the competition. If your answer is positive, more detailed information will be offered. I am looking forwar
15、d to your reply.,Step 4 加入连词，使篇章连贯,Dear Linda, I am delighted to tell you that in order to increase our interest of learning English, an English humorous story competition will be held next Friday in my school, which is the best and the most beautiful in the city. The reason why the competition attr
16、acts my attention is that I am fond of English and crazy about western culture.Whats more (in addition/on the one hand), as we all know, oral (spoken) English plays an important role in language learning, so I long to improve my oral (spoken) English by making use of this competition. Last but not l
17、east (on the other hand), I wish to make friends with those whose has common interest with me so that we can learn together and progress at the same time. Your humor sense and talent of telling stories impressed me so deeply that I strongly recommend you to take part in the competition. If your answer is positive, more detailed information will be offered. I am looking forward to your reply. Sincerely yours Li Hua,Homework,模仿写作： 假设你是张磊，你校拟定于下周六举行一次志愿者活动，去敬老院（gerocomium）看望老人。请你给目前在本市就读的你的笔友Linda写一封电子邮件，邀请她一起参加。内容包括：介绍活动的相关内容； 说明你打算参加的原因； 询问对方的意向。 （注意：词数100左右。）,Thanks for your attention,
