1、大学英语四级,作文,2012年6月英语四级,Part Writing (30minutes) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Excessive Packaging following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象 2.出现这一现象的原因 3.我对这一现象的看法和建议,审题-英
2、文指令,to write a short essay-文章体裁 短文章 essay书信 letter海报 poster,审题-英文题目,entitled Excessive Packaging,审题-文章字数,You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.Suggestion 140-160,历年作文话题,2012年6月 Excessive Packaging 2011年12月 Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong 2011年6月 Online Shopping 2010年12月 Ho
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4、lcome to our club (An announcement 公告) 2006年12月 Spring Gala,文章体裁,2006.12-2012.6 12次考试 议论文 10次 应用文 1次 图表作文 0次,文章话题,非最热点话题 次热点话题 1 社会话题 2 大学生（教育）话题,文章结构,1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象 2.出现这一现象的原因 3.我对这一现象的看法和建议,话题作文,Nowadays, there are more and more X in X . It is estimated估计that X . Why have there been so many X
5、? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is X . Besides, X The third one is X . To sum up, the main cause of it is due to X . It is high time that something were done upon it. For one thing X . For another thing, X . All these measures will certainly reduce the number of X .,对比观点作
6、文,X is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say X is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of X. What is more, X。Moreover,_X. While others think that _X is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,_X. Secondly,_X_. T
7、hirdly,_X_. From my point of view, I think _X_. The reason is that _X_. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.,(一)段首句,1. 关于人们有不同的观点。一些人认为 There are different opinions among people as to _ .Some people suggest that _. 2. 俗话说
8、（常言道），它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。 There is an old saying_. Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 现在，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，；其次，。更为糟糕的是。 Today， _， which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First， _ Second，_. What makes things worse is tha
9、t_.,4. 现在，很普遍，许多人喜欢，因为，另外（而且）。 Nowadays，it is common to _. Many people like _ because _. Besides，_. 5. 任何事物都是有两面性，也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。 Everything has two sides and _ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.,6. 关于人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说），在他们看来， Peoples opinions about _ vary from pers
10、on to person. Some people say that _.To them，_. 7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题，这个问题变得越来越严重。 Man is now facing a big problem _ which is becoming more and more serious. 8. 已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。 _ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way.,9.
11、在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。 _ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life, it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well. 10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出。很显然，但是为什么呢？ According to the figure/number/statistics/pe
12、rcentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that_ while. Obviously，_，but why？,（二）中间段落句,1. 相反，有一些人赞成，他们相信，而且，他们认为。 On the contrary，there are some people in favor of _.At the same time，they say_. 2. 但是，我认为这不是解决的好方法，比如。最糟糕的是。 But I dont think it is a very good way to solve _.For example
13、，_.Worst of all，_. 3. 对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，。而且，最重要的是 _is necessary and important to our countrys development and construction. First，_.Whats more， _.Most important of all，_.,4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以。 There are several measures for us to adopt. First， we can_ 5. 面临，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来。一方面，另一方面
14、， Confronted with_，we should take a series of effective measures to_. For one thing，_For another，_ 6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说，另外。所有这些方法肯定会。 It is high time that something was done about it. For example. _.In addition. _.All these measures will certainly_.,7. 为什么？第一个原因是；第二个原因是；第三个原因是。总的来说，的主要原因是由于 Why_？ The fi
15、rst reason is that _.The second reason is _.The third is _.For all this， the main cause of _due to _. 8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，也有它的不利的一面，象。 However， just like everything has both its good and bad sides， _also has its own disadvantages， such as _. 9. 尽管如此，我相信更有利。 Nonetheless， I believe that _is more ad
16、vantageous. 10. 完全同意这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下： I fully agree with the statement that _ because_.,（三）结尾句,1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为 As far as I am concerned， I agree with the latter opinion to some extent. I think that _. 2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来。 In a word， the whole society should pay close attenti
17、on to the problem of _.Only in this way can _in the future. 3. 但是，和都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，而。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢） But _and _have their own advantages. For example， _， while_. Comparing this with that， however， I prefer to_.,4. 就我个人而言，我相信，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为 Personally， I believe that_. Consequently， Im con
18、fident that a bright future is awaiting us because_. 5. 随着社会的发展，。因此，迫切需要。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。 With the development of society， _.So it“s urgent and necessary to _.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society， it will be better and better. 6. 至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为更合理。只有这样
19、，我们才能 For my part， I think it reasonable to_. Only in this way can you _.,7. 对我来说，我认为有必要。原因如下：第一，； 第二，；最后但同样重要的是 In my opinion， I think it necessary to_. The reasons are as follows. First _.Second _. Last but not least，_. 8. 在总体上很难说是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现。 It is difficult to say whether
20、_is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of_. However， from a personal point of view find_.,9. 综上所述，我们可以清楚地得出结论 From what has been discussed above， we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that_. 10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是 If we can not take useful means， we may not control this trend， and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly， so what we should do is_.,
