1、环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS 1 Last updated on January 12, 2006 Global IELTS School (BJ) All rights reserved. Always shoot for the sky, because if you fail, you will be among the stars. 第一讲 雅思写作考试对中国考生的四个难点 （Chapter 1: The Four Hurdles in IELTS Writing Test） 难点一： Academic Wri
2、ting 学术类写作问题的特殊要求（改错练习） 1. Since private companies dont care much about the public interests, so the government has a significant role to play in scientific research. (不能缩写) 2. Why these travellers damage the environment should be analyzed. （英式美式拼法不能混用） 3. We must do our best（utmost） to protect (pre
3、serve) animals. (词汇用法太嫩) 4. It is clear (manifest) that pornographic shows do harm to (undermine, endanger, jeopard) the lives of lots of youngster (adolescent).词汇，专有特定的修饰 5. Nowadays (In present-day society), human beings face big challenges in many areas. 6. In these day and age, many companies ha
4、ve replaced telephone with internet. 7. We are confronted with many environmental problems. They are becoming more and more serious. (句式，语法) 8. The traffic problem is becoming worse. We must work together to solve it.(句子结构) 9. So individuals, communities and the government all must work hard to figh
5、t crime! (不应该带感情色彩) 10. We must be friendly to other because the Bible said, “Treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated.” (文化背景，圣经不可用) 难点二： No specific topic pool. 题库大，没有公开，而且题目变化多。 对策：雅思话题不会超出十大类别： 文明类： Tourism Education Government Women and families Language and culture Technology and t
6、he Media Development and globalization 野蛮类： Crime Animals Environmental problem 难点三：中国大陆考生对很多话题不熟悉，考场上思考素材花费时间太长 对策：掌握思考素材的四种方法 a 分类法 Some high-school graduates go to travel or work for a period of time before they go to study in universities. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this practic
7、e to their studies. Some people think old building should be destroyed and replaced to make room for new 环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS 2 constructions. To what extent do you agree or disagree? B 替代法 Some people think motorized flight was the greatest invention in the twentieth
8、 century. Do you agree or disagree? Some people think stricter punishment for driving offenders is the only effective way to improve safety on the road. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some people think animal experimentation should be banned because they are cruel. To what extent do you ag
9、ree or disagree? C 综合法 Some people think students should be allowed to evaluate the teachers job performance. Others think this will lead to loss of discipline and respect. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Some people think the government should pay for education and health care. Others
10、 think this is not the responsibility of the government. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. D 裸奔法 （无想法时的救命稻草） People today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face-to-face. What effects will this phenomenon have on
11、 individuals and society as a whole? Unlike many other countries, police officers in the UK do not carry guns. Some people think this is a wise policy. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 往以下这些方面考虑论点 取第一个字母缩写: TM STREEC $ Technology and is very prominent among them. 随着深刻的社会变革带来的种种好处，出现了很多问题，是其中
12、很显著的一个。 6） With the incidence(发生率) of hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed. 的发生率居高不下，这引起了很多人的困扰和警觉。例句：With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed. 环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS 5 7） In this d
13、ay and age, it is standard practice for to do something. 今天，某些人做某事是很普遍的。例句：In this day and age, it is standard practice for parents to rush around all day busying themselves with their work. 8） Such a grave situation merits our careful attention.这样一个严重的情况值得我们关注。 9） The issue of has been thrown into
14、sharp relief/focus. 引起了人们的强烈关注。例句：Soaring car ownership has thrown the issue of car accidents into sharp relief. 10） However, there is no consensus on yet. 或者 people hold divergent /contrasting/conflicting view on 或者 people are divided over 不同的人关于某个问题持不同的看法。例句：People hold contrasting views on animal
15、 experiments.人们对动物试验持不同的看法。 11） Something has been growing at an alarming/ staggering rate. 某事物正在以令人震惊的速度增长。例句：With the car ownership soaring in China, traffic accidents have been growing at an alarming/staggering rate. 12） Whetherhas triggered/sparked/aroused/given rise to spirited debate.是否应该引起了激烈
16、的辩论，同样的意思还可以用以下三个常用句型表达 Whetheris a highly debatable issue. 或者Whether is an issue open to debate 或者 Whetheris a controversial issue. 例句：Whether student should appraise their teachers performance is an issue open to debate.是否学生应该评价老师的教学是一个没有定论的问题。 13） Some (people) assert/contend/argue/hold/maintain/
17、claim/think/believe that 有一些人认为例句：Some people assert that relocating large companies to the countryside is the best way to resolve the traffic and housing problems in cities. 一些人认为把大公司搬到乡村是解决城市交通和住房的最好方法。 14） is largely fuelled by.某现象主要是被所推动。例句：The proliferation of plastic bag is largely fuelled by
18、the pursuit for lower costs. IELTS 议论文主体段写作加分37句型 前进类 1 profit from People the world over can profit from the advancement in motorized flight. 2 A is an integral /indispensable part of B Advertising has become an indispensable part of our lives and it has been exerting profound influence on the way
19、we live, work, play and learn. 3 something plays a pivotal /key role in It is universally acknowledged that education plays a pivotal role in individual success. 4enable /allow somebody to do something Cultural assimilation enables newly-arrived immigrants to get ahead in the new society successfull
20、y. 5get accustomed to do something/adjust to /adapt to New immigrants must get accustomed to the local culture to succeed. 6Someone can get access to something 或者 can access something 或者can utilize something In this day and age, many individuals can access the Internet via computer or mobile phone.
21、倒退类 环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS 6 1is attended by /is accompanied by The staggering advancement of technology is attended by server pollution of the ecosystem. 2The morethe more The more vehicles on the road, the more traffic congestions to occur. 3A can be attributed to B 或
22、者B stems from A The proliferation of traffic accidents can be in large measure attributed to the traffic law not being stringent enough. 4be afflicted with/be plagued with In present-day society, a host of countries are afflicted with chronic poverty. 5deprive someone of something Modern cities depr
23、ive city-dweller of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life. 6something prompt/impels somebody to do Peer pressure often impels youngster to spend excessively on fancy clothes and accessories. 7A has rendered B + adj./noun 形容词或名词 We must ensure that technological innovations will not render us sl
24、aves to high technology. 其中 We must ensure that意思是我们必须确保 我们必须确保科技创新不会让我们变成高科技的奴隶。 The fast-paced way of life has rendered many people alienated from one another. 快节奏的生活让很多人彼此疏远。 8A recent study conducted by the （Chinese academy of Social Science） reveal that如果是教育问题用UNESCO如果是犯罪问题可以用the Ministry of Ju
25、stice 交通问题可以用the Ministry of Transportation 建筑问题可以用the Ministry of Construction 环境问题可以HSUS and Greenpeace A recent study conducted by HSUS and Greenpeace suggested that there were over one million mammals in lab cages today. 9 be addicted to /preoccupied with something In present-day society, many i
26、ndividuals are addicted to /preoccupied with various forms of gambling. 10 something is the chief culprit in 或者something is the root cause of The population explosion is the chief culprit in/ the root cause of water scarity. 11be confronted with something In contemporary society, we are confronted w
27、ith a plethora of violent and pornographic TV shows. 12 present/pose a threat to In contemporary society, the proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish poses a grave threat to humanity. 13 be awash with/be inundated with something The media are be awash with/be inundated with detailed crime coverag
28、e. 14 ifsomething will ensue If parents neglect their offspring, lack of discipline and respect will ensue. 15With the incidence of hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed. 环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS 7 With the incidence of driving offenses hovering
29、at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed. 16something is unwarranted /unjustifiable Experimenting upon lab animals without trying to alleviate their pain is unwarranted/ unjustifiable. 中间类 1on the grounds that Some others oppose to animal experimentation on the grounds that it is inhum
30、ane. 2 exert beneficial/ baneful/ profound influence on something In this day and age, globalization is exerting profound impact on the way we work, live, play and learn. 3 A prevail over / outweigh/ outbalance B The advantages of imposing stiffer punishment on driving offender prevail over the disa
31、dvantages. 4 A bring about/ generate/ breed/ engender/ spawn /induce B. Technological innovations have brought about profound changes to the political, economical and cultural arenas. 5 A is a key determinant of B In an individuals career, tenacity is a key determinant of success. 6 It is manifest t
32、hat 或者It is universally acknowledge that It is manifest that globalization can also engender a host of banes to the lives of people in the third-world countries. 解决类 1 give priority to something The government should give priority to the optimization of its financial resources. 2 dedicated A to B Th
33、e government should dedicate more money to the alleviation of chronic poverty. 3 be likely to fall prey to / be vulnerable to Without proper parental guidance, children are very vulnerable to the violent or pornographic content on TV shows. 4 something should be condemned rather than condoned(押尾韵) I
34、ndiscriminate copying of traditional architectural style today should be condemned rather than condoned. 5 it is imperative/ crucial/ key/ essential that 或者 something is of paramount/ overriding importance. To the newly-arrived immigrants, it is imperative that they adapt to the local culture immedi
35、ately. 6 abide by/ comply with It is essential that government pass more stringent laws to compel drivers to abide by/ comply with the law. 7 something requires/ necessitates /call for The grave ecological problem requires/ necessitates/ call for joint effort of all the nations on the globe. 环球国际英语学
36、校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS 8 8 distinguish between A and B Many youngsters lack the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong. 9 must ensure that Parents must ensure that they dedicate enough time and energy to their offspring. 结尾段常用模板 1） based on the above discussion, I am
37、convinced that（用于一边倒文章的结尾段）基于以上的讨论，我确信 2） In the final analysis, I concede that However, .On balance(用于折衷式文章结尾段) 作为最后总结，我承认但是综合起来看 3） The upside of something, outweighs its downside 或者the strengths of something, prevail over its weaknesses或者the pros of something outbalance its cons.某事利大于弊（如果 弊大于利把顺序
38、颠倒一下就可以了） IELTS 作文常用同义词 人类the human race, humanity, man, humankind, Homo sapiens 在当代in contemporary society, in present-day society, in this day and age 解决(及物动词)tackle, address, resolve, combat 破坏(及物动词)undermine, jeopardize, devastate(最后一个与其最强) 影响(名词)impact, repercussions, ramifications, implication
39、s 危险(名词)perils, hazards, dangers 明显的(形容词)manifest, apparent, evident, obvious 从事(及物动词)carry out, conduct, perform, go about 积极的，好的 beneficial, advantageous 消极的，坏的 baneful, detrimental 好处坏处benefits, blessings, boonsbanes, proscons, advantagesdisadvantages, meritdemerit 无处不在的 prevalent, pervasive 大量的
40、a host of, a multitude of, a vast number of (后面跟可数名词复数) a great deal of, a vast amount of(后面跟不可数名词单数) 增进enhance代替improve 贫穷的impoverished代替poor 保护preserve代替protect 富裕的affluent/wealthy代替rich 污染contamination代替pollution 需要（及物动词）require, necessitate, call for Patrick 考试经验分享 （test-taking tips） 有人提出先写task2
41、再写task1。这种说法听起来好像很新颖，其实是在回避考试的不确定性，与先写task1再写task2的做法没有本质的优劣之分，那么到底应该如何决定写作顺序呢？ 根据我参加雅思考试的经验以及学生的反馈，在拿到考卷以后，不管一个人心理素质多好，绝对没有人只会看一道题就开始写作。任何考生都一定会本能的现把两道题都很快的看一遍再开始写其中的一道题。同学们很快地看完两道题目以后，如果确实觉得task2地题目自己准备地很充分，有信心在40分钟左右写出一篇自己满意地议论文，那么就应该先写task2，因为task2占总分地60。但是如果看完两道题之后，你觉得task2地题目自己准备得不充分或者一时想不出足够得
42、内容，那么我强烈建议大家先写task1。这是因为task1的结尾段往往需要从图表中总结出深层的关系，这个task1结尾段深层关系对评分是很重要的。而task2的结尾段，与一些老师所持的观点相反，除了“discuss both views and give your own 环球国际英语学校 GLOBAL IELTS SCHOOL 全真版本写作训练班专用教材 www.IELTS 9 opinion”这一类题型之外，其他题型的结尾段只起概括上下文作用，在实际评分中并不是那么重要。因为考官在评阅大家的task2结尾段时，一般都清楚多数同学写这一段的时候时间已经时第58分钟甚至59分50秒了，所以考官
43、知道task2的结尾段时无法准确反映一个考生的写作水平的，评分的时候互放松对结尾段的要求，而重点打击开头段和主体段。 第二讲 十大全真版本范文，词汇与模板 Education 类 Some people think students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers job performance. Others believe that will lead to loss of respect and discipline. Discuss and give your own opinion. 开头段(不少于4句) In this da
44、y and age, it is standard practice for business executive to fill out performance-evaluation forms to give their assessment of their subordinates work. But when it comes to the evaluation of school teachers job performance by their students, people hold divergent views. Some argue that students shou
45、ld be allowed to do so. Others contend that disrespect and indiscipline will ensue if students evaluate their teachers work. Personally, I believe both these two views have some merit. 主体段1(不少于5句) Granted, there could be some possible drawbacks to students evaluating their teachers work. First, if n
46、ot well-managed, evaluation by the students may be completely worthless or even misleading. It is manifest that not all students would give their evaluation responsibly and some students may make mean comments. Secondly, some students criticize their teacher not because their teachers have a slack a
47、ttitude about their job. Rather they do so because they dislike or even despise schooling. 主体段2(不少于7句) However, encouraging students to evaluate their teacher can bring about more boons. In the first place, it is an effective means of motivating the teachers to improve their lectures. Teachers have
48、to keep adjusting their teaching to measure up to the expectations of the student. In the second place, regular input affords the teacher objective and balanced ideas about their own performance. Without such feedback, it is hard for the teacher to have accurate assessment of their own teaching. In
49、the third place, a measure of students autonomy can make the student better prepared for their adult life. The student becomes better at decision-making and critical thinking. 结尾段(不少于3句) In the final analysis, I concede that enabling the student to evaluate their teachers performance might have some potential drawback. However, by averaging out students appraisal and enco
