1、1层级四高仿模板快得分“七大文体”有诀窍近几年全国卷高考写作文体基本稳定,主要考查书信文体的写作,书信依据表达的内容又可分为邀请信、建议信、申请信等七种类型。针对这七种文体分类训练,有利于考生掌握各文体的写作特点和行文规范,并提供可供“仿作”的架构模板,有利于考生在考场上快速打开思路,依模板临摩快得分。学案(一) 邀请信题型技法 (学一学)邀请信作为应用文的一种,也是高考英语书面表达的一个常考体裁。根据邀请信的性质可将其分为普通邀请信和正式邀请信。普通邀请信对内容和格式的要求都不高,只要说明活动的内容、时间、地点等即可。正式邀请信的措辞要正式、语气要热情有礼,然后介绍活动的情况。邀请信的末尾都
2、要表示出希望对方参加或出席的愿望。经典考题 (悟一悟)典例 (2017全国卷)假定你是李华,想邀请外教 Henry 一起参观中国剪纸(papercutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:1展览时间、地点;2展览内容。注意:1.词数 100 左右;22可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。满分范文Dear Henry,I am Li Hua, a student from your writing class. There is going to be a papercutting exhibition in the Art Museum on Sunday. I am writing to
3、invite you to go there with me.You know, papercutting is one of the traditional Chinese art forms with a long history. Since you are fond of traditional Chinese culture, I think this is a great opportunity that cannot be missed. The exhibition lasts from 9:00 am to 5:30 pm. Not only will all kinds o
4、f papercutting works created by famous artists of this field be on show that day, but a lot of useful and interesting activities will be held, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture. Anyone interested is welcome to visit for free.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua阅卷评点同位
5、语成分“a student from your writing class”的使用,使语言表达更地道。使用邀请信的常用句式“I am writing to invite you to .”表明写信目的,直奔主题。句中使用 with 短语作定语,使表达更丰富。使用了高级词汇 opportunity,以及 since 引导的状语从句和 that 引导的定语从句,增加了文章的得分点。形容词 interested 作后置定语使语言更简洁地道,高级结构“be welcome to do sth.”的使用为文章锦上添花。增分佳句 (背一背)1开头部分常用语:(1)I am writing to invit
6、e you to ./Im writing to tell you that there will be a .我写信邀请你/我写信告诉你有一个(场)3(2)I am very pleased to invite you to participate in . to be held in .我很高兴邀请你参加在举行的(3)I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in .我想你要是能来参加那就太好了。(4)It is my pleasure to extend an invitation to you to . with
7、 me.我很高兴邀请你和我一起2表达活动内容常用语:Here are some details about this activity./The following are some details about this activity./Some details about this activity are as follows.本次活动的一些细节内容如下。3结尾部分常用语:(1)Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come to .?如果你能来请写信告诉我,好吗?(2)If you are interest
8、ed in it, please let me know and Ill send you more information.如果你感兴趣,请告诉我,我给你发送更多的信息。(3)My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.如果你能来,我和我的家人将会感到非常荣幸。(4)My phone number is ./Looking forward to .我的电话是/盼望(5)I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.我想在那
9、里见到你,请尽快告诉我你的决定。热点押题 (练一练)假定你是李华,是学校英语俱乐部的负责人,请你根据下列要点给学校的外教 Steve写一封信。1邀请 Steve 参加于周一晚上 7 点钟在学校礼堂举行的英语角活动;2请 Steve 介绍“美国梦(American Dream)” ;3请 Steve 根据自己学汉语的经验谈谈如何提高英语口语。注意:1.词数 100 左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考范文:Dear Steve,On behalf of the English Club, I am writing to invite you to join our English Cor
10、ner next Monday. It will begin at seven oclock in the evening at 4the school hall.In many films “American Dream” is mentioned, but we still dont have any knowledge about it. So would you please give us a lecture on American Dream? By the way, you have made great progress in your Chinese. Could you s
11、hare with us some experience on how to improve our oral English?We are all looking forward to seeing you then. Please inform us in advance if you cannot come.Yours sincerely,Li Hua层级四 高仿模板快得分学案 (一 ) 邀请信1学案(七) 推荐信题型技法 (学一学)推荐信是写给单位、学校等介绍或说明应聘或求学人员情况或事物的信件,其格式比较正规,用语也很正式。经典考题 (悟一悟)典例 (2014浙江高考)学校图书馆需要
12、购置一批新书, 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越,你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书(popular science books)和文学类图书(literary books)。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封 100120 个词的信,推荐这两类书,并分别说明推荐理由。注意:信的抬头与落款已给出(不计入词数)。Dear Mr. Wang,Yours sincerely,Li Yue2满分范文Dear Mr. Wang,As far as I know, our school library plans to buy some books. What Im writing for is to sug
13、gest buying popular science books and literary books.Not only do popular science books offer us students basic knowledge about science, but also they are helpful to deal with daily problems in a scientific way. Above all, every one of us is curious about scientific discoveries. Apart from popular sc
14、ience books, literary books are also beneficial in many aspects. For instance, they can open our eyes to the world as well as arouse our thoughts about life. Besides, the more literary books we read, the greater our skill of writing will become.I would appreciate it if you could adopt my advice.Your
15、s sincerely,Li Yue阅卷评点此处是 what 引导的主语从句,what . for 表示目的;另外此句点明写信目的(推荐图书),总领全文。可以看出考生独具匠心之处。not only 引导的部分倒装结构,强调推荐科普类图书的理由。apart from 这一高级短语使用非常贴切,同时起到过渡作用,引起下文推荐文学类图书的理由,突显该考生的英语语言实际运用能力。此句使用了一个比较级的固定句型结构“the比较级,the比较级” ,强调阅读较多文学类图书对提高写作技能的重要性。这是一个表达感谢的委婉句型结构,很有礼貌地希望对方能采纳他的建议。增分佳句 (背一背)1开头部分常用语:(1)P
16、lease allow me to introduce one of my best friends to you.请允许我向你介绍一位我最好的朋友。(2)I am writing to you to recommend one of my college classmates in Beijing.我给你写信是要推荐一位我在北京时的大学同学。(3)I am very glad to have this chance to write to you to .我很高兴能有这次机会给你写信(4)I take pleasure in introducing to you .我很高兴能向你介绍2推荐理
17、由常用语:3(1)In addition to her excellence in academic study, she also performs very well in her job.她除在专业学习方面优秀外,在工作中她也表现很好。(2)She also performed well in other courses, ranking top in her class.在其他课程中,她也表现突出,在班上名列前茅。(3)He is very intelligent, honest, creative, and very easy to get on with.他很聪明、诚实、富有创造性
18、,而且很容易相处。3结尾部分常用语:(1)I would be most grateful if you could lend due attention to this letter and contact me at .如你能对此信给予一定的关注并通过和我联系,我将非常感谢。(2)Ill be more than happy if you can take my suggestions/ideas into consideration.如果你能考虑我的建议/想法,我会非常高兴。(3)In addition, I express my sincere thanks for your atte
19、ntion.另外,我真诚地感谢你的关注。(4)Thanks for your attention and hope to receive your reply.多谢你的关注,希望能收到你的回复。热点押题 (练一练)假定你是学生会主席李华,你听说 Peter 下学期要来我们学校任教,你写信向他推荐高三学生李民作为他的助理。推荐理由如下:1李民在校表现突出;2勤奋,能熟练使用计算机,善于与他人交流;3学校的优秀生之一,英语口语好。注意:1.词数 100 左右;2可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯。参考范文:Dear Peter,Im Li Hua, Chairman of the Students Uni
20、on. Its great to hear that you are coming to teach in our school next semester. I am writing to you to recommend Li Min, a Senior 3 student of 18, to be your assistant.His performance was outstanding in the school years. He is a diligent boy, who can use the computer skillfully and has a gift for co
21、mmunicating with others. Whats more, he is one of the top ten students in our school, and his 4spoken English is extremely excellent. Im sure he can be helpful in your work and life in China. Therefore, I here recommend him to you with all my heart.If you have any question about it, please contact m
22、e.Looking forward to your coming.Yours sincerely,Li Hua学案 (七 ) 推荐信1学案(三) 求助信题型技法 (学一学)写英文求助信的原因是目前自己遇到了一些困难,需要请求对方帮助。因此整篇文章应用一般现在时表达文意,当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。经典考题 (悟一悟)典例 (2016全国卷)假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume)。给外教 Ms Jenkins 写信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。注意:1.词数 100 左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。满分范文De
23、ar Ms Jenkins,Im Li Hua and I plan to take a parttime job in a foreign capital company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in the application form and had my resume ready for it. However, Im not sure about the words and format. Therefore, Im writing to ask for your help and professional
24、 advice. Would you please spare some time to read through the materials attached? Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, Id like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. Id be most grateful if you could do me a favor.Im looking forward to your reply
25、.2Yours,Li Hua阅卷评点表示转折关系的过渡词,把前两句看似平淡的叙述提到了一定的高度,很好地为下句做了铺垫。therefore 关系明确,因果适当,不但使上下文融会贯通,而且突出了写信目的。Would you please do .?是请求别人帮助的句型,用得恰到好处,符合说话者的身份;过去分词 attached 作定语,使句子更加简练地道,增加了文章的可读性。Would you mind doing .?不同的句式表达了相同的意思,避免了表达形式的单一化,语气委婉。这是文章提档次的句子。most grateful 道出了作者希望得到帮助的迫切和感激之情,也显示了作者较高的语言运用
26、能力。增分佳句 (背一背)1开头部分常用语:(1)My name is .Im writing to you for some help.我叫,写信的目的是向你寻求一些帮助。(2)Im writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor.我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。2寻求帮助常用语:(1)Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for help.面对这么多的困难,我不得不向你求助。(2)In the meanwhile/At the same time, I beg you to .
27、so that . Also, I would like you to .同时,我恳求你以便我也想让你(3)I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.我想让你给我介绍一些学习语法的好方法。3结尾部分常用语:(1)Im sure with your help I can make great progress.我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。(2)I will appreciate any of your help.我将非常感谢你的一切帮助。热点押题 (练一练)假定你是李华。最近,你与父母之间关系紧张,甚至发
28、生争吵。你决定给外国的笔友Charlie 写一封信,向他求助。内容包括:31谈谈你目前遇到的问题;2针对如何改善与父母的关系向他求助。注意:1.词数 100 左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。Dear Charlie,How are you getting along? I am looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua参考范文:Dear Charlie,How are you getting along? Recently I have quarreled with my parents, whic
29、h makes me very annoyed. I am writing to ask you for help.You know, my parents dont allow me to go out and play with my friends at weekends. They think I should make full use of every minute to work on my lessons. However, I think I need to play with my friends so that I can relax myself after a wee
30、ks hard work at school and it is a good way for me to keep in touch with my friends. I know it is wrong to quarrel with them, but I dont know what to do to persuade them to change their mind and develop a good relationship with them. Would you please offer me some advice?I am looking forward to your
31、 early reply.Yours,Li Hua学案 (三 ) 求助信1学案(二) 建议信题型技法 (学一学)建议信是作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议,以便让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题。建议信可以写给个人,就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法或观点;也可以写给某个组织或者机构,就改进其服务等提出建议或忠告。经典考题 (悟一悟)典例 (2017北京高考)你的英国朋友 Jim 所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅” 。Jim 来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:1你建议的线路;2你的理由;3你的祝愿。注意:1.词
32、数不少于 50;2开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,2Yours,Li Hua满分范文Dear Jim,What a pleasant surprise to hear that youre coming to China for a visit! As for the two travel routes youre considering, theyre equally good. Anyhow, I suggest the tour to Mount Tai. Standing in Shandong Province, Mount Tai has long been a
33、popular tourist attraction, with many Chinese legendary stories attached to it. Having a trip there will give you a good understanding of Chinese culture. Of course, mountain climbing takes strength and courage.Hope that my advice will be of some help to you and that youll have a good time in China.
34、Yours,Li Hua阅卷评点开门见山,直奔主题,使用了感叹句和宾语从句,用现在进行时表示将来的动作,表达地道。介词短语“as for”和省略关系词的定语从句是高级结构。现在分词作状语,with 复合结构, “be attached to”以及高级词汇 attraction 的使用使本句充满文采。这里说爬山需要体力和勇气,发挥自然,想象合理。结尾使用祝愿句,使用了“be of抽象名词”句式结构,并用 and 连接两个宾语从句,增加了文章的得分点。增分佳句 (背一背)1开头部分常用语:(1)You have asked for my advice about . and I will try
35、to make some useful suggestions here.关于你向我征求意见,在此,我尽量提出一些有用的建议。(2)Im sorry to know that you are having trouble with/in doing . at the 3moment.得知此刻你遇到麻烦我深感遗憾。(3)Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how .非常高兴收到你的来信,在信中,关于如何你向我征求意见。2表达建议常用语:(1)Here are some tips/advice/suggestion
36、s.这里有一些建议。(2)You may/might as well do .你不妨做(3)I would like to suggest that .我想建议3结尾部分常用语:(1)I believe you will take my advice into account/consideration seriously.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。(2)I hope you will find these suggestions useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见对你来说有用/有帮助。(3)In my opinion/Personally/As far as Im con
37、cerned, it would be wise to take the following action.在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。热点押题 (练一练)假定你是李海,你的堂兄李华在国外学习,你们经常用英文通信。他即将完成学业,不久前来信就是否回国工作征求你的意见。请根据下列提示回信:1建议他回国;2你的理由:(1)学有所用,就业容易;(2)照顾父母。注意:1.词数 100 左右;2行文应连贯,内容应完整;3开头语与落款已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear Li Hua,Im very glad to have received the letter you sent me two wee
38、ks ago. 4Yours,Li Hai参考范文:Dear Li Hua,Im very glad to have received the letter you sent me two weeks ago. Ive been thinking about the question you asked me. In my opinion, you should come back after you finish your studies abroad. For one reason, what you are studying is badly needed nowadays in Chi
39、na. It will be quite easy for you to find a good job. In fact, I know a few big companies in our city are hoping to hire people like you. For another reason, I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as they are getting old. Therefore, I think its a good idea for you
40、 to return. So what are you waiting for?Best wishes.Yours,Li Hai学案 (二 ) 建议信1学案(五) 感谢信题型技法 (学一学)感谢信是向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的信件。在收到别人的邀请、受到别人的表扬或帮助后,被邀请者、被表扬者或被帮助者往往需要写一封感谢信。经典考题 (悟一悟)典例 (2018青岛模拟)假定你是李华。最近,你刚结束在英国为期一个月的交换学习。学习期间,你和房东 Mr. Wilson 结下了深厚的友谊。请根据下面的写作提纲,给Mr. Wilson 发一封电子邮件。内容包括:1表示感谢;2回顾他对你
41、的照顾和帮助;3邀请他来中国游览。注意:1.词数 100 左右;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。满分范文Dear Mr. Wilson,How is everything going? Ive been back home now. Im writing to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kindness.While I was in England, your help and kindness made my stay special and enjoyable. How I miss the days we spent tog
42、ether! to your help, I Thanks2got used to the lifestyle there soon. I still miss the delicious meals you prepared for me. Besides, I really appreciate your patience while you were talking with me. By practising speaking with you every day, I gradually improve my spoken English.I hope we can keep in
43、touch with and communicate with each other in the future. It would be a great honor for me to invite you to come to China so that you can experience Chinese culture.Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua阅卷评点开篇问候,显现礼貌。gratitude 是高级词汇,体现了作者扎实的语言功底。句中使用了感叹句和定语从句,大大提高了表达难度和写作档次。高级短语 keep in touch with 和 communicate w
44、ith 的正确使用为文章锦上添花。本句中 it 作形式主语, so that .引导目的状语从句,这显示了作者对复杂句式的运用能力,增加了文章得分的亮点。增分佳句 (背一背)1开头部分常用语:(1)I am writing to express my thanks for .我写这封信是为了表达我对的谢意。(2)I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for .在信中我要为向你表达我诚挚的谢意。(3)On behalf of my whole family, I would like to extend
45、my sincere gratitude for .我谨代表我全家对表示真诚的感激。2结尾部分常用语:(1)Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories; we will remember them forever.没什么能抹掉我们美好的记忆,我们会永远牢记在心。(2)Again, I would like to express my warm thanks to you!/Thanks again for your kind help.我再次对你表示衷心的感谢。/对你的热心帮助再次表示感谢。(3)I appreciate it mo
46、re than I can say./I can never thank you enough.3感激之情,无以言表。热点押题 (练一练)假定你是李华,目前正在英国做交换生。你的英国朋友 Debbie 送了你一张苏格兰传统舞蹈凯利舞(Ceilidh Dance)舞会票。现在,请给她写一封邮件致谢,并询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。参考范文:Dear Debbie,I am delighted to receive your ticket for the Ceilidh Dance. I really feel grateful for your kindness and it will sure
47、ly make my cultural experience here more colorful. Here, Id like to know some details about this dance.First, could you please give me a brief introduction to this dance so that I can know something about it before attending it? Besides, Id like to know whether I need to bring anything like a bag or
48、 a present, and particularly, what kind of clothes and shoes Im supposed to wear, the formal ones or the casual ones? Finally, Im wondering how I can get there and avoid being late.Looking forward to your early reply.Yours,Li Hua学案 (五 ) 感谢信1学案(六) 询问信题型技法 (学一学)询问信也称咨询信,是写信人就自己不太熟悉或不理解的事情或问题,向有关部门、专家或
49、熟悉该情况的朋友询问信息时所使用的一种书信。询问信从呈送对象来看可以分为以下三类:1写给一些专门机关的询问信;2.写给报社、电台的询问信;3.写给个人的询问信。高考英语书面表达试题中,考查类型以第一类和第三类居多。经典考题 (悟一悟)典例 (2014全国卷)假定你是李华,计划暑假期间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。注意:1.词数 100 左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3参考词汇:住宿accommodation满分范文2Dear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Hua, a middle school s
50、tudent from China and I intend to go to Britain to study English this summer vacation. Seeing your ad in the newspaper, I show great interest in it and I want to learn more information about your courses. First of all, would you please tell me the exact start date and class size? By the way, how man
51、y school hours are there each week? Whats more, Id like to know how much I shall pay for the course and what type of accommodation you will provide for me.I would appreciate it if you could explain to me these questions in detail. Looking forward to your early reply!Yours faithfully,Li Hua阅卷评点“a mid
52、dle school student from China”为 Li Hua 的同位语,其用法地道、得体,一语道破了 Li Hua 的身份。此句应用了非谓语动词作状语的结构,为下文埋下了伏笔,同时也充分展示了作者很强的驾驭语言能力,给阅卷人留下了很好的第一印象。此外, “show interest in”属于高级词汇。“first of all”及“whats more”的使用使文章层次清晰、行文连贯。看似不起眼的“by the way”却把前后句子紧密地衔接在一起,使文章过渡自然、顺畅。作者用固定句式“I would appreciate it if .”收尾能够产生非凡的效果,一方面能够展
53、示写信人的迫切心情,另一方面能够展示作者高超的语言运用能力。增分佳句 (背一背)1开头部分常用语:(1)I am writing to ask for information about .我写信询问关于的信息。(2)Id like to know more information about .我想了解更多关于的信息。(3)Would you mind giving some detailed information about .?你介意给我一些的详细信息吗?2咨询常用语:(1)I would greatly appreciate it if you could provide us wi
54、th .如果你能为我们提供一些的信息,我会非常感激。3(2)I have decided to join the program; could you tell me when it starts?我决定加入这个项目,你能告诉我什么时候开始吗?(3)Id like to know if theres .我想知道是否有3结尾部分常用语:(1)I would appreciate it if you give me an early reply at your convenience.如果你方便时尽快答复,我会非常感激。(2)I would be grateful to receive a pro
55、mpt reply.我会非常感谢收到你及时的答复。热点押题 (练一练)假定你是李华。你打算暑假去美国参加一个国际中学生夏令营活动。请根据下面提示信息用英语写一封咨询信,询问这个夏令营的有关情况。内容包括:1你打算参加为期几周的夏令营;2询问开营日期、地点、主要活动和费用。注意:1.词数 100 左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考范文:Dear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua. I am a 17yearold student from China. I am planning to attend Americas Best Summe
56、r Camps during the summer vacation. I am writing to inquire about it.First, I have decided to join the 3week summer camp. Could you tell me when it starts and ends so that I can plan my trip in advance? Second, I am wondering where the summer camp will be held. Third, what activities are we going to take part in at the camp? Besides, how much shall I pay for it?I would appreciate it if you give me a reply at your earliest convenience.Yours,Li Hua