1、1. 地点介绍通常写哪几方面的情况 (写作要点)? 2. 地点介绍常用的词汇和句型有什么?,Describing places 描述地点,Basic Writing基础写作,When you want to describe a place, what aspects will you write about?,1. 地理位置 (location)及地位(position) 2. 人口 (population) 3. 面积 (area) 4. 交通 (Transport ) 5. 气候 (climate) 6. 历史(history) 7. 名胜古迹 (places of interest),
2、地点介绍写作要点:,写作必备词汇和句型,地理位置(location)和地位(position),位置:,lie in,be located in（on，to）,be in/on/to+方位词,stand,on the coast of,be situated in ,face，,方向:,east, south, west, north, northeast, northwest southeast, eastern, southern, western, northern,地位:,political/commercial/cultural centre,the capital of,the (
3、second) largest in China/the world ,1. Guangzhou, _(广东省会), _ the south of China . 2. West of the city _ a tall building.3. _ (locate) in the smallest continent-Oceania, Australia is _ (第六大) country in the world.4. _ mountains on three sides(三面环山) ，the small village _ a clear river on the east.5.The
4、beautiful town _ (locate) to/ on the west of the lake.,stands,Located,is located,lies in,capital of Guangdong Province,the sixth largest,Fill in the blanks,= is situated /located in,Surrounded by,faces,句型: _ _ _ _ _,人口(population),1. The city has a large population of 2. The population of is 3.The p
5、opulation increases/ decreases;4. The population has grown to 5. The city, with a population of, is ,Fill in the blanks1.Australia _ about 20 million. ( 有 2 亿多人)2.China is a developing country, _ 1300 million. 3. _ the city is increasing year by year. （这城市的人口每年都在增加）4. The population of our country _
6、 (grow)1.3 billion.,has a population of,with a population of,The population of,has grown to,面积 (area) 1) cover / have an area of, 2) take up, 3) with an area of, 4) the size of our city is ,Tiananmen Square, the largest square in the world, _ one million square kilometers.2. Our school, _（占地面积130平方公
7、里），is very large in size.,covers /has an area of,which takes up 130 square kilometers,Transport (交通):1) It is very convenient for 2) The best way to experience is 3) It takes to take a bus from to5) is within easy reach. (近在咫尺),1. _you to come to our city.( 很方便)2. The best way to experience Beijing
8、is to _ a bus tour.3. It _ about 2 hours to take a bus from Fengshun to Xinning.4. When you take a bus to the Finance Bureau (财政局), our school _. （近在咫尺）,It is very convenient for,take,takes,is within easy reach,句型:1.The weather is _ (冬天不会太冷夏天不会太热)2. The climate in northwest of China is _ . (冬冷夏热),天气
9、:,气候 (climate),warm, dry, humid, cold, sunny, stormy, rainy, cloudy, snowy, windy,neither too cold in winter nor,too hot in summer.,hot in summer and cold in winter.,历史(history)1) has / with a (long )history of 2) has witnessed too much coming and going in history(亲眼目睹了太多来来往往的历史),China _ over 5000 y
10、ears. (历史悠久)2. Built in the16th century, the castle _. (亲眼目睹了太多来来往往的历史),has a long history of,has witnessed too much coming and going in history.,1) be rich in 2) Known as, the city attracts visitors from all over the world.3) be well-known / famous for 4)The city is home to 5) The city offers visit
11、ors 6) have many places of interest,名胜古迹 (places of interest),1. In Sydney, there are many _, such as the Opera House.2. The places around our city _ natural resources.3. Australia _ many places of interest.（以著名）4. The city _ visitors a moments rest from the busy city.,places of interest,is famous f
12、or,are rich in,offers,Fill in the blanks,实战演练,请根据以下的情景说明，使用5个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息。 新丰县位于广东省北部，历史悠久，是一个山区县，自然资源如矿产、森林、农产品等非常丰富，总面积2015平方公里，人口约24万，气候宜人，夏天不是太热，冬天不是太冷。云髻山是新丰县的风景胜地之一,每年吸引大量游客。,Key word: mountainous county 山区县 natural resources自然资源 mine 矿产 farm products农产品 the Mount Yunji云髻山,第一步 审题体裁:时态:,一般现
13、在时,说明文,新丰县位于广东省北部， 历史悠久， 是一个山区县， 自然资源如矿产、森林、农产品等非常丰富， 总面积2015平方公里， 人口约24万， 气候宜人，夏天不是太热，冬天不是太冷。 云髻山是新丰县的风景胜地之一,每年吸引大量游客。,第二步 划分提取信息,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,Key word: mountainous county 山区县 natural resources自然资源 mine 矿产 farm products农产品 the Mount Yunji云髻山,新丰县位于广东省北部， 历史悠久， 是一个山区县， 自然资源如矿产、森林、农产品等非常丰富， 总面积2015
14、平方公里， 人口约24万， 气候宜人，夏天不是太热，冬天不是太冷。 云髻山是新丰县的风景胜地之一,每年吸引大量游客。,第三步 翻译成句,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,Key word: mountainous county 山区县 natural resources自然资源 mine 矿产 farm products农产品 the Mount Yunji云髻山,第三步 翻译成句1. Xinfeng is located/situated/lies in the north of Guangdong province.2. It has a long history. 3. It is a m
15、ountainous county .4. It is rich in natural resources, such as mine, forest, farm products and so on.5. It takes up/ covers an area of 2,015 square kilometers.6. It has a population of about 240 thousand.7. The climate is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter.8. Every year, the
16、Mount Yunji attracts many tourists from different places for its beautiful scenery.,1. Xinfeng is located/situated/lies in the north of Guangdong province.2. It has a long history. 3. It is a mountainous county .4. It is rich in natural resources, such as mine, forest, farm products and so on.5. It
17、takes up/ covers an area of 2,015 square kilometers.6. It has a population of about 240 thousand.7. The climate is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter.8. Every year, the Mount Yunji attracts many tourists from different places for its beautiful scenery.,1,2,3,4,5,第四步，连句成章,第四步，
18、连句成章,Tips:1. 适当整合信息点，使用过渡性词语,使文章更连贯。2. 如果内容多，应多用并列句和复杂句,内容不多，可用简单句。3. 尝试不同的句型：简单句、并列句、定语从句、强调句、倒装句、名词性从句、非谓语动词作状语等等。4. 使用高级句型与词组。5. 切记：保证语法正确、句子无误，不要因追求句子复杂而出错。,是否只用了5句? 要点是否齐全? 句子篇章结构是否完整? 确定句子主干，特别是主语和谓语。没有则需变换或增添主谓。 有无语法或拼写错误? 是否用上了高级词汇或高级结构? 有无过渡性词语,使文章更连贯?,第五步 检查,Sample: Located in the north of
19、 Guangdong province, Xinfeng is a mountainous county with a long history. It covers a total area of 2,015 square kilometers with a population of about 240 thousand. The climate here is pleasant, neither too hot in summer nor too cold in winter. There are many places of interest, among which is the Y
20、unji mountain,whose scenery is very beautiful, attracts lots of tourists from different places every year. Xinfeng is also rich in resources, such as mine, forest, farm products and so on.,Practice:Try to finish your passage within 15minutes.,写作内容北京，位于中国东北部，是中国的首都，全国的政治、文化中心。全市面积一万六千多平方公里，人口1400余万，是
21、全国第二大城市。夏季炎热多雨，冬季寒冷干燥。历史悠久，是旅游胜地，有很多著名文化古迹如紫禁城(Forbidden City)，颐和园，长城等。每年都吸引众多世界各地游客。写作要求1.只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;2.介绍必须包括所有要点。,写作训练：请你用5句话介绍我国首都北京。,Possible Version Beijing, situated in the northeast of China, is the capital city as well as the political and cultural center of the country. It covers a tota
22、l area of more than 16,000 square kilometers with a population of 14 million. Here it is hot and rainy in summer while cold and dry in winter. As a city with a long history, there are many places of interest in Beijing, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and the Great Wall. Therefore, it is a popular tourist destination with many visitors from all over the world every year.,
