1、（英语）英语试卷英语书面表达题分类汇编含解析一、英语书面表达1书面表达在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5 点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。Time to leave school at 5 o clockat 4:45 at 5 o clock.Activities to do after schoolexercise to keep healthy and read booksdo what we want, such as listening to musictak
2、e a part-time job.注意：（ 1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；（ 2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（ 3）词数： 80-100；（ 4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。短文开头： “What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we haveheld a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion._【答案】 “What time should junior high schoo
3、l students leave school?”This week we have held aclass meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students shou
4、ld leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving s
5、chool at five oclock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also drawsome pictures I like.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting ，talkabout ， the result of ， keep healthy ， after school ，have more time to do ， want to do ， such as， listen to music ， in favor of ，clean the room ，
6、 play tennis 等。而复杂并列结构 They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school. 和 Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o clock./ Some think that students should leaveschool at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as
7、 listening tomusic.等复 从句 构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多 化；同 Most studentsthink / Some think / A few think使叙述条理， 次分明，是本文的亮点。在学 中注意 牢 一些固定句式及短 ，写作 就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有 性，也更富有条理。【点睛】 面表达 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求将所 定的材料内容 整理后展开思 ，考 运用所学英 知 准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，尽可能使用高 和 复 的句式 构以便得到 高的分数。2随着社会的 展，通 的方式从 古 代的
8、 信到当今的互 网， 着巨大的 化。 你写一篇短文， 你 代通 工具的使用及看法。内容包括：1. 你喜 使用的通 方式有哪些？2. 它 的 点和缺点是什么？3. 你 使用 代通 工具要注意什么？要求： 1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出 真 的学校名称和姓名；2. 意 ， 数80左右。开 已 出，不 入 数。As time goes by, there are many different kinds of communication methods now. As for me,【答案】 As time goes by, there are many different kinds of c
9、ommunication methods now. As for me, I prefer to chat with others by mobile phone, but sometimes I chat by communication software, such as WeChat and QQ.Mobile phones bring great convenience to people, but people can only hear the sound by phones. By using net software, we can easily see the people
10、we talk to on the Internet. However, sometimes we concern more about mobile phones instead of the people around.In my opinion, we should pay more attention to the face to face communication and try not to waste too much time on mobile phones.【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文， 我 代通 工具的使用及看法。【 解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，
11、人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：thereare ， I prefer to，Mobile phones bring，we can ， we should，So let s等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。【点睛】本文 构 凑， 言 。开 介 了我喜 使用的通 方式有哪些；接下来介 它 的 点和缺点是什么，以及使用 代通 工具要注意什么；最后呼吁号召大家合理使用 代通 工具。此 prefer to do sth, by phones, on the Internet, conc
12、ern about, in ones opinion,try one s best等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3（题文）书面表达在中学生机器人大赛上，出现了一种专门照顾老人的新型家用智能机器人，它的主要功能有：1. 定时做饭、洗衣服；2. 陪老人聊天、下棋、做运动；3. 处理紧急情况（如：拨打 120）假如你是该机器人的发明者，请你介绍这个产品，并谈谈你的未来设想。要求： 1. 意思连贯，语句通顺；2. 词数 80 词左右；短文的开头已给出（不计入总词数）3. 参考词汇：at a fixed time 定时emergency紧急情况ccompany sb.陪伴某人Ladies and g
13、entlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now Ilike to introduced my new invention to all of you.【答案】 Ladies and gentlemen,Thank you for attending our robot show. Now I d like to introduce my new invention to all of you.I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. It can cook
14、meals and do somewashing at a fixed time. When old people feel alone, it can also accompany them by having a chat,playing chess or doing exercise. What s more, it can deal with some emergencies. For example, ifan old man falls ill suddenly, the robot will call doctors immediately for help.I m sure m
15、y new invention will be a great help to the elderly. I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help of new robots.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如thank you for doing ， I d like to do，introduce sb. to ， all of you ，at home ，do some washing ， at a fixed time ，h
16、ave a chat， play chess， do exercise，deal with ，a great help ， in the future 等。而 Thank you for attending our robot show./ I invented the new robot mainly to help the elderly at home. / I think in the future people will live a more comfortable life with the help ofnew robots. 等非谓语动词和复杂从句的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表
17、达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4今天手机在我们日常生活中已广泛使用。但中学生在学校是否应该持有手机，一些学生和老师有不同的观点。你们学校的校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。观点理由一些学生赞成拥有方便与家长联系；一些老师反对拥有有学生用手机玩游戏；有学生用手机作弊；你的观点1.2.要求：1. 表达清楚，语
18、法正确，上下文连贯；2. 必须包含表格所给的提示信息，并作适当发挥；3. 词数： 80-100 词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily lifetoday._【答案】 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However,
19、some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school.Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily.Som
20、e teachers are against it They think that some students cant control themselves and often play games. Whats worse, some students cheat in exams by using mobile phones. Besides, using mobile phones too much does great harm to students eyes.In my opinion, I think it is helpful for students to use mobi
21、le phones in a right way. Firstly ， students can learn more knowledge using mobile phones. At the same time, parents and teachers should do something to help students. Only in this way can mobile phones be of help to their studies.【解析】【详解】本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏。需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系，上下文之间可以适当使
22、用连接词。如but, so, then 等。可以适当使用高分句型。【点睛】高分句型： I think it is helpful for students to use mobile phones in a right way 我 正确的方式使用手机 学生是有帮助的。I think+ 从句。It is+形容 for sb to do sth做某事 某人来 是的。5共享 自从 2016年在江阴投入使用以来， 人 来了 多便利，受到人 的追捧，改 了人 的出行方式，但同 也遇到了一些挑 ，是国民素 的“”照妖 ， 你根据表格中信息的提示， 21 世 英文 写一篇关于共享 看法的稿件。社会 状自从出
23、 ， 受 誉。随 可 ，出行方便 多 有益健康，减少 染 用不高， 担得起未及 存在 占道 路你的 点我 -参考 ：公共自行 public bicycles注意事 ： 1.短文 包括表格中所有提示内容，要求 句通 ，意思 。2.表格中 “你的 点 ”一 用 2-3 句 展开合理想象，做适当 。3. 数在 90 个左右，文章的开 部分已 出，不 入 数。Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.【答案】 Public bicycles are becoming more and more popula
24、r in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can beseen everywhere so that it s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles notonly is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What s m
25、ore, using public bicyclcosts so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people can t returnpublic bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they arein our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After al
26、l, itfliving a green life.【解析】这是一篇材料作文，要求给英文报社写一篇投稿，介绍对共享单车看法。作文应包括 4 个主要内容，一个是社会现状，第二个优点，第三是存在的问题，最后发表个人的观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意上下文的连贯，将这些内容有机的连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语，注意正确的时态和语态以及谓语动词的形式，还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，让整篇短文表达流畅。6书面表达为了配合 “足球进校园 ”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项
27、运动并谈谈自己的梦想。历史悠久，深受喜爱常 识世界杯 4 年举行一次男生女生皆可参加好 处利于培养团队精神考生自拟（至少1 点）偶 像梅西，有足球天赋梦 想考生自拟（至少1 点）注意： 1. 词数 90 左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：梅西MessiDear classmates,I m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.Thank yo
28、u for your attention.【答案】 Dear classmates，I m very excited to hear that China will build 20， 000 football-themed schools by 2020 Football has a very long history It is liked by people all over the world The World Cup takesplace every four years Playing football has lots of advantages First ，both boy
29、s and girls can take part in it Second， it helps develop team spirit What s more， playing football is good for our health I m a football fanMessi is my hero He has a gift for playing football My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi I hope China will hold the World Cup some day Than
30、k you for your attention 【解析】【详解】试题分析：本题要求按提纲的提示，介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确本文主要从三个方面来写：介绍足球运动及其好处；说说自己的偶像；谈谈自己的梦想。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的 Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes pla
31、ce every four years. it helps develop teamspirit. What s more, playing football is good for our health等等.句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了 first, second 等使得短文层次清楚。7假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80 岁。目前数量在减少，因为：1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。要
32、求： 1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80 词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙 ivoryDear classmates_I believe everyones contribution（贡献）can make a big difference.Yours,Lihua【答案】 Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants
33、 is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephan
34、ts. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.I believe everyones contribution（ 献）can make a big difference.Yours,Lihua【解析】【 解】本文是一封倡 ,
35、倡 大家保 大象。文章共分 三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所 的 状，然后 明出 种状况的原因，最后 了保 的大象我 如何去做。 主要 一般 在 。提出倡 可以使用We can/ We should/ Lets/Wed better的表示建 的句子。写作 注意不要使用太复 的句型，以免出 法 ， 使句子具有 性，可以适当使用 。本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the largestmammals,及First, we should plant more trees也使用到了比 和最高 ；Firstly, .Secondly,等 的使用使文章具有 次性，条理清晰。并
36、且一些 的使用，比如so, or,but等也使文章具有 性，是一篇不 的文章。8 了吸引外国游客，杭州旅游网希望 杭州茶文化 行宣 。 你根据表格信息，用英 其写一篇介 ， 数80 左右。What is Longjing Tea famous for?What is it used for?How is it produced?Good tasteKeep healthyGrow on the sides of mountains .What s the best place to learn about it?Hangzhou National Tea Museum .Why?Longjing Tea_【答案】 Tea culture is one of the most famous cultures in China. Longjing tea is one of the famous Chinese traditional teas and famous green tea. Why is Longjing Tea famous for? Because it taste good. It is good for people to k
