1、（英语）初三英语英语书面表达汇编专题训练答案及解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（ 北京中考模拟）现在，某英文报纸正在开展以遇见美为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈一谈生活中你遇见美的一次经历，主要内容包括你什么时候在哪里遇见了美，经历了什么事情以及你为什么觉得它美。提示词语： visit, touch, impress, meaningful, amazing, memory 提示问题：1. When and where did it happen?2. What did you experience?3. Why was it beautiful?_【答案】 Last
2、year, I watched the most beautiful movie of my life at an IMAX theater in Beijing. On the giant screen in front of me, a true story from history and amazing filmmaking came together to give me a very meaningful experience.The movie was Dunkirk, and the story that happened on the screen was one of he
3、roism and the sad reality during WWII. As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater.From the touching musical score and impressive images seen on the screen, to the heartache and pride felt by the soldiers, this movie left
4、 me a beautiful memory that I will never forget.【解析】试题分析：本文以遇见美为主题的短文，谈谈生活中遇见美的一次经历，所以句子的主语是第一人称单数，句子的谓语动词用一般过去时，要注意不要遗漏要点，要注意上下文的衔接，用自己熟悉的短语和句式。写作亮点：短文用了一些短语和句式，如：in front of sb 在某人面前； give sb.sth 给某人某物；用了 that 引导的定语从句，如： The movie was Dunkirk , and the story that happened on the screen was one of
5、heroism and the sad reality during WWII. 用了 as 和 as if 引导的从句，如： As I watched the movie, it was as if I were experiencing the same victories and setbacks right from my seat in the theater. 增加了文章的亮点。2（ 湖北初三）童年是人生最美好的时光。小时候你一定接收了许多心爱的礼物，你最喜欢的礼物是什么？你拥有它多长时间了？它是谁送给你的？它有什么特别的意思？它给你带来了怎样的回忆？请你以“My favorite
6、 gift 为题”写一篇80 至 100 词的英语短文。要求：行文连贯、条理清楚、语句通顺、语法正确、书写規范；依据提示可适度发挥，文中不得出现真实姓名。My favorite giftMy favorite gift from childhood is_【答案】 My favorite giftMy favorite thing from childhood is a toy bear. I have had it for ten years. My mother gave it to me on my fifth birthday.I like it very much because i
7、t is so cute. Its special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old. I thought it was one of my best friends.The toy bear has left me so many memories. I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. Now, I dont want to give it up, but t
8、o be honest, I have to. Because Im getting older!【解析】【详解】这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下你的心爱礼物。主要从：你最喜欢的礼物是什么？你拥有它多长时间了？它是谁送给你的？它有什么特别的意思？它给你带来了怎样的回忆？这几个方面去介绍。时态为一般过去在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一
9、】Its special to me because I used to play with it almost every day until I was ten years old.这对我来说很特别，因为我几乎每天都在玩，直到十岁。句子 because I used to play with it almost every day是由 because 引导的原因状语从句。【高分句型二】I remember when I was six years old, I would never go to bed without it. 我记得当我六岁的时候，没有它我永远不会去睡觉。句子 when
10、I was six years old 是由 when 引导的时间状语从句。3（ 云南中考模拟）假如你叫李华, 三年的初中生活即将结束, 你将迎来漫长的暑假, 你的笔友Peter写信来询问你的暑假计划。请根据表格中所给的基本信息给你的笔友回信, 告诉他你的暑假计划。要求：1. 回信必 包含表格中的所有信息, 并可适当 , 字数在80 字左右, 开 和 尾不 入 字数。2. 回信中不得出 真 的人名和校名, 否 将以零分 。3. 面表达必 写在答 卡上 , 如在本卷上作答 , 一律不得分。Your planswhatwhyPlan onevisit grandparentsmiss themPl
11、an twovisit Beijing and Shanghaiwant to open my eyesPlan threelearn senior （高中） English and mathdream to go to a famous universityby myself.Dear peter,_YoursLi Hua【答案】例文Dear peter ,Thank you for your letter, in the letter, you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, now, let me tell you all about
12、 it.Firstly I will visit my grandparents as soon as I leave school, I haven t see them for a long ti miss them so much. Then , I am going to take trip to Beijing and Shanghai to open up my eyes, aswe all know, both cities are so beautiful and important, I believe I can learn a lot by travelling. Aft
13、er coming back, I will learn senior subjects by myself to get ready for the coming senior school, because I dream to go to a famous university.That s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours.YoursLihua【解析】【 解】本文分三个自然段。第一段点出文章主 you asked me how I planned my summer vacation, no
14、w, let me tell you all about it 。第二自然段用 Firstly ， Then ， After coming back 有序列出三个 划。文章 尾用 That s all about my plans, please write me soon and tell me about yours 总 。另外，文中 第一人称， 主要 一般将来 will visit my grandparents ， I am goingto take trip， I will learn senior subjects等。4（ 江 中考模 ）写作:81. 目前，很多高中都开 了特色 程
15、，涵盖烘焙、舞蹈、 琴、跆拳道、足球等内容，很大程度上增加了校园生活的趣味性，但也有人持不同的看法。作 即将升入高中的你， 于特色文化 程有何看法？ 根据下表的提示完成一篇短文并 述你的 点。Views on Special Courses1. 有助于增加我 的技能； 同2. 有利于培养我 不 易放弃的精神；3. 1. 多占用学生 ，耽 学 ；不 同2. 需要投入更多的 ，增加家庭 力；3. 1. 你的 点2. 要求：1. 表达清楚， 法正确，上下文 ；2. 必 包括表格中所有相关信息，并适当 ；3. 数： 100 左右（文章开 已 出，不 入）4. 不得使用真 姓名、校名和地名等。Views
16、 on Special CoursesNowadays, many senior school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas._【答案】 Views on Special CoursesNowadays, many school carry on some special courses in their normal subjects. But different people have different ideas.Some
17、 students like to attend these classes. First of all, this kind of courses can help us developour lif e abilities. What s more, these courses can help us build the spirit that we shouldneasily. Also, with the help of these courses, students can broaden their views on the world.However, we can t reac
18、h an agreement. Some students think it takesomuchs time to have theselessons that they can t pay attention to their grades. Moreover, we need to pay much money forthese classes, and it will surely increase the cost. At last, we don t have so many teachers othese courses. We can t get more knowledge
19、without the guide of specific teachers.Every coin has two sides. I think it s good to have special courses. It s not only impove oubut also give us much fun.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如carry on， first of all ， like todo， play a game， this kind of ， What s more， give up， with the help of ， so
20、much time ， payattention to ， on the paper ，put up 等。而复杂并列结构Moreover, we need to pay muchmoney for these classes, and it will surely increase the cost/ It s not only improve our abilitiesalso give us much fun. 和 Some students think it takes so much time to have these lessons thatthey can t pay atten
21、tion to their grades. / I think it s good等to复have杂从句special结 courses.构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。5（ 湖南中考模拟）假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英
22、语写一封保护大象的倡议书。提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80 岁。目前数量在减少，因为：1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。要求： 1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80 词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙 ivoryDear classmates_I believe everyones contribution（贡献）can make a big difference.Yours,Lihua【答案】 Dear classmates,Elephants are the largest
23、 mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.As a result, we ne
24、ed to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the el
25、ephants.I believe everyones contribution（ 献）can make a big difference.Yours,Lihua【解析】【 解】本文是一封倡 ,倡 大家保 大象。文章共分 三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所 的 状，然后 明出 种状况的原因，最后 了保 的大象我 如何去做。 主要 一般 在 。提出倡 可以使用We can/ We should/ Lets/Wed better的表示建 的句子。写作 注意不要使用太复 的句型，以免出 法 ， 使句子具有 性，可以适当使用 。本篇文章内容完整，符合材料要求，Elephants are the lar
26、gestmammals,及First, we should plant more trees也使用到了比 和最高 ；Firstly, .Secondly, 等 的使用使文章具有 次性，条理清晰。并且一些 的使用，比如but 等也使文章具有 性，是一篇不 的文章。so, or,6（ 天津中考模 ）手机在生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色， 多中学生沉迷于手机无法自拔，比如你的好友 Miller. 根据以下提示点写一篇短文：1. 去年， Miller 手机游 非常入迷，而且花大量 用手机聊天看 影；2. Miller 与家人和朋友交流甚少，离开手机会很焦 ；3. 昨天 因 走路看手机被自行 撞了，膝盖受
27、 ；4. 你的建 参考 ： mobile games 手机游 anxious 焦 be crazy about 对 入迷要求：1 字数 80-100 个 2 开 已 出不 入 数3 要点 全，行 ，适当 Today more and more people are addicted to （沉迷） playing the mobile phones. Last year, My friend Miller was【答案】 Today more and more people are addicted to （沉迷） playing the mobile phones. Lastyear， My
28、 friend Miller was crazy about mobile games as well. He spent too much time inchatting and watching films on the phone. Miller hardly talked with his family and friends. Helived in his own world. He felt very anxious without mobile phones. Yesterday he was hit by a bike,because he was watching his p
29、hone at that moment. As a result, he hurt his knees badly.In my opinion, I think we can t use the mobile phones for a long time, I mean, no more than halfan hour a day. Don t take mobile phones to school. A mobile phone is just a kind of tool, not our whole life.【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；
30、然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；再紧扣要点，动笔写作，可适当发挥。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。7（ 扬州市梅岭中学中考模拟）假如你是Liu Bin，请用英语给笔友Bob 回复邮件。注意： 1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；2.要点齐全，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；3.词数
31、 100 左右，邮件的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。Dear Bob,I m very glad to know that you will come to our school.Yours,Liu Bin【答案】 Dear Bob,Im very glad to know that you will come to our school. Let me tell you something about it. Our school is very big and our classroom is very tidy. We go to school five days a week an
32、d have six classes every day. There is also an activity class in the afternoon. Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better. Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the w
33、eekends too.My classmates are very nice. We often help each other. Everyone has his own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness.Im looking forward to your coming.Yours,Liu Bin【解析】【详解】这篇短文
34、使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be glad to， listen to themusic， five days a week， so that ，prepare for ， for a while ， of course， at the weekends ， help each other ， look forward to 等。而固定句型 it is important for us to communicate with each other and share our happiness and sadness. 和 Im very glad to know that
35、you will come to our school./ Usually I take exercise after school so that I can keep healthy and study better./ Sometimes I listen to the music for a while, which is a good way to relax myself. 等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发
36、挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。8（ 山东中考模拟）书面表达下图描述了李明和家人去年五一假期（May Day Holiday ）外出旅游的经历。请根据图片提示，用英语写一篇100 词左右的短文。要求： 1. 完整叙述图片内容，可适当发挥；2. 结合自己的实际情况陈述个人观点或给出建议。【答案】 Last May Day holiday, Li Ming and his family went to Qingdao se
37、aside. They paid a visit to Qingdao by bus. There are many places of interest in Qingdao. They went to the beach, visited the Museum. But there were many people on the beach. What you see at the seaside is not the scenery, but the numerous shaking heads. At the seaside, people dont pay attention to hygiene. Theres rubbish everywhere. In my opinion, when traveling, people should not only pay attention to safety, but also pay attention to hygiene and not
