1、（英语）初三英语英语书面表达汇编技巧和方法完整版及练习题及解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（ 山 中考模 ）写作假定你是李 ，在一位名叫Tiger Mom 的学生家 的博客上，你看到以下内容。 你根据博客内容，写作要点和要求， 位家 回复。I m the mother of a fourteen-year old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school
2、,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ?写作要点： 1. 表明自己的看法。2. 述自己的理由。3. 提出至少 2 条建 。【答案】 Hi,TigerMom,What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.Although high grades are an import
3、ant factor in evaluating students and for their future universityadmission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored.There aremany examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful insociety as they were expected. The reaso
4、n is often that the pressure from their parents allowsthem almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choiceto help them grow upmentally and physically.So I suggest that you take your friends advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl ； let herhav
5、e more friends and social activities ； and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.【解析】 是一篇 材料作文， 学生家 的博客 行回复。 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：My idea is that，There are， Some all-Astudents in school have， Thereason. is，So I suggest that等句式的 用。写作
6、中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。点睛：本文 构 凑， 言 。开 表明自己的看法，接下来 述自己的理由，最后介 自己的建 。此 turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, makemistakes, of one等s这own些 的运用也 文章增色不少。2（ 州遵 十一中中考模 ） 的同学 ，初中生活即将 束，你 一定有很多的感触 .假如你是Tony,名城中学九（ 1）班的学生。 以My junior high school life为题 ,写一篇80 左右的短文。提示：1.个
7、人基本情况介 2.校园（校园干 而美 ，活 非富多彩）；老 （ 授知 ，教会做人学（和睦相 ，互相学 ，共同 步）。, 常鼓励）；同3. 学校、老 、同学表达感 和祝福。要求：1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当 。2.文中不能出 真 的校名和人名。【答案】 My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life iscoming to an end. I m glad to tell you somethin
8、g about my school life.Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together
9、. I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文，介 我的初中生活。【 解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 和一般将来 ，人称 第一，三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：My name is，I m glad to ，Our campus is，Our teachers teach us等句式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。【点睛】本文 构 凑， 言 。开
10、介 了我的个人情况，接下来介 我 的校园，老 和同学，最后 学校、老 、同学表达感 和祝福。此 go by, come to an end, tell sb about sth,all kinds of, behave oneself, encourage sb to do sth, get on with, learn from, make progress 等 些 的运用也 文章增色不少。3（ 江 中考模 ）假 你是Beth, 前段 曾向英 校刊投送一篇 My EnglishTeacher Miss Zhang 的短 。近日，又至 季， 生 忙着互致 言。 此， 部策划开 “A Lette
11、r to My Teacher ”，邀 你以信件的形式重新投稿。短 如下：My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try,She leads us to a world of why.We all respect and admire her.注意事项：1.稿件内容须根据短诗展开合理想象，不得抄写短诗原文：2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境。3.词数在 70 个左右，稿件的首尾已在答题卡上给
12、出，不计入总词数：4.稿件必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。_【答案】 Dear Editorial Office,I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher She is in her forties Her small round glasses make her look smart She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours She is kind
13、and helpful ， too She always helps us with our study She loves jogging， so she looks healthy To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001 She has also decided to donate her body for medical research after her death I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future I
14、think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular TeacherI hope that you agree with me Yours sincerely，Beth,【解析】【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。根据编辑部策划开 “A Letter to My Teacher专栏”，邀请你以信件的形式重新投稿。文章时态用一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，要层次清楚，要点
15、分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。【点睛】点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后 扣要点， 笔写作，在写作 程中，要注意句与句、段与段之 的 渡，必要 可适当运用表示 折、因果、并列、比 等关系的 ，使文章 渡平 ，自然流 ；最后，要仔 有无 拼写 、 点符号 用等， 要 法 构是否合理，有无重复、 的 言，大
16、小写是否正确， 数是否符合要求等。4（ 四川中考模 ） 面表达暑假即将来 , 于如何安排孩子初中 后的第一个假期,家 和孩子自己有着各自的想法。根据下表提示,写一篇英 短文,描述他 的不同看法,同 表你自己 暑假安排的 点。Parents opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some houseworkKids opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeingYour opinion注意 （ 1）表格中的 点 供参考 ,允 适当 ;（ 2）开 已 出 ,不 入 数 ;（ 3）文中不得出 真 姓名和校名等信息;（
17、4） 数 :不少于 80。How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions._【答案】 How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their ownopinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so its important to take summer co
18、urses. They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think its time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We ne
19、ed to relax ourselves after working so hard at school. Its good for us to do some sports.【解析】【 解】这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系【点睛】这篇短文用到了一些好的句型： They also think kids can help do
20、 housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think its time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing. 这些给文章增色不少。5（ 广州市第十六中学中考模拟）书面表达初中就要毕业了，校报 “英语角 ”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点 写一封信，说说你的计划。活动毕业晚会时间6 月 28 日晚上七点地点学校礼堂 school hall参与者全体初三学生和老师
21、活动内容1.邀请校长作演讲；2.互赠礼物送祝福；3.各班表演精彩节目4.要求： 1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯洁。3.80 词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数; 2.正确使用语态，语法正确，书写整; 4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。Dear editor,I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party._Best wishes,Yours Lihua【答案】 Dear editor,Im very happy to have the chance to show my plan
22、 for the graduation ceremony. The ceremonywill be held in our school hall at 7 o clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. Firstof all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gift
23、s and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.Best wishes,Yours,Li hua【解析】【分析】这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知
24、本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。6（ 江苏中考模拟）目前，许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班，对此人们有不同的看法。请根据下面内容写一篇短文。1. 能够学得更好，考试考得更好，上更好的高中；赞成者的观点2. 避免花太多时间看电视、玩游戏。1. 学生需要时间休息；反对者的观点2. 压力过大不利于身体健康。1. 课堂上好好学就足够了，补课不必要；你的观点2. 课后可以自己 .注意： 1. 表达清楚，语法通顺，上下文连贯；2
25、. 必须包括提示的所有信息，并适当发挥，至少两点；3. 词数： 100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Nowadays, many middle school students are taking all kinds of after-school classes at weekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it. Some people think that_【答案】 Nowadays, many middle school students are t
26、aking all kinds of after-school classes atweekends or on holidays. There are two different opinions about it.Some people think that students can get better exam results and go to better senior high schools by taking extra classes. They also believe that students can avoid watching too much TV or pla
27、ying computer games in this way.But others have a different opinion. They think that students need more time to rest. If theytake too many classes, they mi ght feel too stressed. That s not good for their health.As for me, I don t think taking extra classes is necessary. Learning hard in class is en
28、ough. We just need to go over our lessons after class. We can also teach ourselves as it is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability.【解析】【分析】整体分析： 是一篇提 作文。是一篇 文，第一段要写目前， 多中学生利用周末和 假日上 外 班， 此人 有不同的看法。第二段要写中学生利用周末和 假日上 外 班 同者的 点。第三段要写中学生利用周末和 假日上 外 班反 者的 点。第四段要表述作者自己的 点。【 解】写作之前要1. 清
29、目，看看有哪些要求？哪些 ？人称？2.确定文章 型， 叙文？ 明文？ 文？看 ？ 是 用文？3.确定 ， 一 是混合。4.写下关 、短 、句型。5.列出提 和段落，并运用适当的句型和 渡 接。6.根据提 和段落 构句型及关 句完成文章。写完后反复 修改推敲 色，人称、 、 复数一致等。运用自然 渡法和自然 接法来是文章更 地道、通 、 正。用短 、句型：all kinds of，Some others ， As for me ， Some people think that 。 They also believe that 。 If they take too many classes。 It
30、 is very important for us to have a lifelong learning ability. 来增加了文章的亮点。【点睛】 作文的写作方法要注意 真 ，可以分四段写： 体 描述 ； 成；反 ；你的看法。注意 渡性 言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短 ，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和 法 。7（ 天津中考模 ） 你根据以下内容提示, 学校广播站英 写一篇短文在你好朋友王 Wang Qiang 身上的一件事。1.上周一放学后Wang Qiang 回家 ,在十字路口 ,看到一位老太太正要 路。,介 生2.当 交通灯坏了,所有 都一个接一个通 十字路口。3.老
31、太太犹豫不决,不敢独自穿 十字路口。4.王 看到 种情况,主 上前 住了 着老人安全 了路口。5. 就此事 你的看法.要求 : 1.短文要包括以上所有要点。 2.行文 ,可适当 。 3. 数 :80-100。开 部分已 出,不 入 数。参考 :十字路口crossroads在犹豫不决 hesitate inLast Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike backhome._【答案】 Last Monday Wang Qiang rode his bike back home. On his way home, at a crossroadshe saw an old l
32、ady going across the road. Because the traffic lights didn t work at that time,the traffic crossed the road without stopping one by one. The lady hesitated in whether she should cross it, but she was afraid to do that When Wang Qiang saw that, he offered to stop the traffic with his bike in order to
33、 lead her to cross the road safely.In my opinion, Wang Qiang is such a good example that we should learn from him. At the same time we also suggest that all the drivers should let people cross first and then traffic when thissituation happens.【解析】【分析】 是一篇 材料作文，介 生在我的好朋友王 身上的一件事。【 解】 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般
34、 在 和一般 去 ，人称 第三人称，注意主 一致 ，句子 构主要 系表 构和 构，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：Thelady hesitated，but she was afraid，heoffered to，Wang Qiang is等句.式的 用。写作中注意运用代 ，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述 序，符合 关系。【点睛】本文 构 凑， 言 。开 介 了王 回家的路上看 一位老太太不敢 路，接下来介 他主 上前 住了 着老人安全 了路口，最后我就 件事 我的想法。此 on one s way, see sb doing sth, at that time, without doin
35、g sth, offer to do sth, learnfrom 等 些 的运用也 文章增色不少。8（ 山东初三）你知道年最受欢迎、最新潮的健身方式是什么吗？“Plogging，”一边捡垃圾，一边慢跑，正逐渐走进我们的生活。拾荒（clean up trash ）、慢跑（jog），不仅促进环境卫生，而且有益身体健康，可谓一举两得。请结合自己的日常生活经历，用英语写一篇100 词左右的短文。内容包括： 1、身体力行，保护环境的事例；坚持锻炼，增强体质的事例。2、结合事例，谈谈你对目前最环保的运动方式做起，做生态中国，健康中国的践行者。（ plogging） 的认识，以及怎样从身边小事注意： 1、可以围绕主题，根据要求，进行适当的发挥。3、短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。【答案】 Everyone has his or her favorite outdoor activities. I enjoy running so much because it makes me keep fit and have an excellent figure. Now, plogging is spreading all over the world.What s plogging? Put simply, plogging is the act of cl
