1、高考书面表达： 如何写好邀请信,假如你是班长李华，你打算邀请外教Mr.Brown到你班作一个健康知识讲座，请你给他写一封电子邮件，要点如下： 1.学生面临的健康问题 2. 讲座的具体内容 3. 讲座的时间安排：下周三下午3:30-5:00,Step 1审题 1. 审任务: 2. 审目的: 3. 审内容:,给外教写邀请信,邀请外教作健康知识讲座,3个重要要点（缺一不可：具体化）,Step 2 构思,写作目的：邀请外教作健康讲座,思考： 学生存在哪些健康问题？,细节拓展的 三个维度,写作目的 决定 细节拓展,Im Li Hua, monitor of class1. On behalf of ou
2、r school, I sincerely invite you to to give a lecture about health in our class.,自我介绍,发出邀请,写作目的,邀请信,名词作同位语,Nowadays the state of senior high school students body quality is getting worse and worse year by year. Many students are near-sighted. Some students are overweight and some have sleep problems
3、.,健康问题,问题一,问题二三,In order to stay slim, some students choose to go on a diet or even take weight-loss pills to keep a good figure. Therefore, our class would like to invite you to give us a lecture, in which you can talk about the dangers of unhealthy ways of losing weight and offer us advice on keep
4、ing fit in a healthy way.,讲座内容,目的,Lasting one and half hours from from 3:30 pm to 5 pm, the lecture will be held next Wednesday in our classroom. Will you be available then?Im looking forward to receiving your early reply.,讲座内容,目的,时间地点,Step 4 思维导图,VS,Step 5 有效 VS 无效,假定你是李华。你是学生会主席。你校将于5月25-30日在广州沙面举
5、行龙舟赛 (Dragon Boat Race)。请根据以下内容给姐妹学校剑桥中学(Cambridge High School)写一封邀请信。 （1）写作目的 （2）活动时间、地点和意义 （3）回复时间：2017年4月15日前,Step 1审题 1. 审任务: 2. 审目的: 3. 审内容:,_,_,邀请姐妹学校参加活动,给姐妹学校写邀请信,3个要点,Step 2 构思,写作目的：邀请姐妹学校参加活动,思考： 如何说服姐妹学校参加活动？,细节拓展的 三个维度,写作目的 决定 细节拓展,Outer beauty,23,Step 3 赏析,Inner beauty,Im Li Hua, chairm
6、an of the Student Union. On behalf of our school, I sincerely invite you to join in the Dragon Boat Race organized by us.,自我介绍,发出邀请,写作目的,邀请信,Lasting 5 days from May 25th to May 30th, the race will take place in Sha Mian, Guangzhou. The race is not only exciting and inspiring, but also rich in symbol
7、ic meaning. The traditionally-held activity conveys Chinese peoples wish to show their respect and admiration to the great poet, Qu Yuan, which enables us to better inherit our traditional culture and pass on its spirit.,活动内容,时间、地点,活动意义,With the hope that our students can have further communication
8、with your students as well as learning the spirit of cooperation, I sincerely wish you could accept our invitation and we together make it an educational and far-reaching acitvity.,收获、再邀,In order to get everything perfectly prepared, Ill be extremely grateful if you could give us your reply before A
9、pril 15th. Looking forward to hearing from you soon.,活动须知,提示期限,交际结语,Step 4 思维导图,VS,Step 5 有效 VS 无效,1. Besides, all the participants will receive a secret present designed by our school. What maybe deserves your attention is that we also invite some schools with good reputation as well as yours, inte
10、nding to offer students a chance to share learning experience with each other.2. The Race will be held from May 25 to May 30 in Sha Mian. More than 20 excellent teams have been invited to take part in it. The team which arrives at the finish line first will gain the first prize.,拓展1：活动的内容,有效拓展,_,_,_
11、,_,_,_,_,_,拓展2：活动的意义,1. Besides eating Zongzi on the Dragon Boat Festival, we will also hold the race, because we want to show our respect for a great poet Qu Yuan, who threw himself into the river. And people threw rice into the river in case the fish would eat his body.2. The Dragon Boat Race is d
12、esigned to honor and remember Qu Yuan, a talented poet with a strong and noble personality. The Race can not only broaden the students horizons, but also strengthen the friendship between our school and your school, Cambridge High School.,有效拓展,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,_,Step 6 总结,围绕 目的,逻辑 严密,行文 连贯,表达 得体,目 录,
13、假如你是校英语俱乐部主席李华,计划下个月在全校开展一次英语演讲比赛，请你给Mr. Smith写一封英文电子邮件，邀请他担任本次比赛的评委，并询问他下周什么时候有空在学校大礼堂做一次关于演讲技巧的讲座。注意：1.词数100左右2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3. 邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Smith, _ Yours sincerely, Li Hua,假如你是校英语俱乐部主席李华，计划下个月在全校开展一次英语演讲比赛，请你给Mr. Smith写一封英文电子邮件，邀请他担任本次比赛的评委，并询问他下周什么时候有空在学校大礼堂做一次关于演讲技巧的讲座。,_,_,_
14、,_,_,_,_,Step 1审题 1. 审任务： 2. 审目的： 3. 审内容：,邀请Mr. Smith担任评委+做讲座,给Mr. Smith写电子邮件,4个要点,_,围绕 目的,逻辑 严密,行文 连贯,表达 得体,Step 2 有效拓展,常见错误： 1. I am Li Hua, the chair of our school English club. I am Li Hua, chairman of the English club of our school. 2. There is an English speech race will be held on next month.
15、 There is an English speech contest (competition) to be held next month. 3. To improve students english spoken, we will held a english speaking match. To improve students spoken English, we plan to hold an English speech competition. 4. I want to know weather you are convenience to give us a lecture
16、 about speech skills. I wonder whether it is convenient for you to give us a lecture about speaking skills.,VS,有效 VS 无效,拓展1：举办英语演讲比赛的目的,1. To encourage students to speak English bravely, our school plans to hold an English speech competition. 2. In order to improve students spoken English, an Englis
17、h speech competition will be held. 3. To inspire students motivation in learning English and give them a chance to put what they have learnt into practice, we plan to hold an English speech competition.,有效拓展：更具体,如何区分hold 和 held 人/ 组织 + hold + 活动 活动+ will be held (作谓语，将来时） 活动 + to be held （作后置定语，表将来）
18、 活动 + held （作后置定语，表过去或被动）,拓展2：邀请Mr. Smith做评委的原因,1. You are so good at oral English that we cant find anyone else that is more suitable to be a judge. 2. You are one of the best English teachers in our school. Many students have made great progress with your guidance. So I want to invite you to be a
19、judge in the coming competition. 3. To make the competition more professional and wonderful, we will invite you and some excellent teachers to be the judges. Besides, you could make some effective and helpful comments on the competitors performances.,有效拓展：更有说服力,无关内容,结束交际语：,Para. 2/3 What+(Why)+(How),Step 1 写作,
